"Sherlock makes a mental note to be revolted in the morning."
Seriously. It's magnificent! I expresses that the character is in the middle of a shift! Is developing and the reader sees right through it. It's a lovely phrase!
Please, feel free to substitute "Sherlock" with the character of your choice (Aeryn Sun anyone? Cam Mitchell? Dean Winchester? Arthur?) and write lots and lots of fanfic.
FYI, this particular fanfic was
In Deed Accomplish Our Designs by greywash on AO3, part of the excellent "The Good Morrow" series. Well played, author. Well played.
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