mmm yeah. I just had so much stuff going around in my head that I couldn't express-- I was like "whatever" and just put down whatever words came to mind as soon as I thought of them.
NOTE TO READERS OF THE PREVIOUS COMMENT: In this context, "KKK" does in no way, shape, or form refer to the Klu Klux Klan.
i just reread it like 3 times. i didn't realize it's affect until now. did you intentionally mean to write about some sort of sexual/ intimate relationship. all i see when reading it is this couple that starts having sex, goes out on a date (like in a park), laughs and kisses outside, then goes back and has more sex. and then the end is like their feelings for eachother. the whole thing gives me this vivid mental image of their relationship. it's like... sweet and loving and playful, but also totally sexy and intimate. and they are so deeply in love for eachother.
None of that was really intentional, no, but I love that that's what you take away from it! (When I wrote it, I did have in mind a certain real-life relationship. Though the poem is based on what you probably originally assumed it was based on, the relationship is a little more conventional--and thus, fictional. That's why I changed "three" to "two"--because the final product was about the fiction, not the inspiration. Does that make any sense?) That you see something "sweet and loving and playful, but also totally sexy and intimate" in this makes me very happy, but that effect was pretty much accidental.
Yeah, trust me, I can totally see where your head was at that point. The number two actually threw me off, cuz I though I knew what you meant, but then I was like... maybe not. But yes, I totally see what you were thinking and trying to get at. And that's what I got from it. =) I'm glad you like my view. It really struck a cord in me. I think it's because you and I are much more similar in thought and feeling than it seems right off the bat. But we have totally different ways of expressing ourselves, so it's seen more as opposite. Although I write poems with my thoughts straight out, and you use a more abstract view, the emotion and feeling behind it is all the same.
and OMG one more thing. i just reread it. again. and kinda saw something else. like... knowing what the inspiration is... i read it trying to picture it in my mind. and it all makes sense. like.... the word "paint" caused me to gasp and put my hands over my mouth with an "oh my!" reaction. and the end... kind shows what's yet to come. ya know?
When I was posting it, I was thinking, "Damn, everyone's gonna know what this is about right away. Some of these are dead giveaways." But I guess not, so good! Haha that you had a sudden epiphany makes me laugh.
and the end... kind shows what's yet to come. You think?? I wonder... :9 xD
I think I'm the only one that will get this. Don't worry. You and I share a lot more thoughts on this topic than I think anyone else cares to think about.
And... yes. I do think. I'm not sure who it will end up happening to though. (Watch out, it's gonna end up being the 'm' who's left in the dust. If you know what I mean... lol)
omg ---- QUESTS OF THE KKK!!!!!! yessssssssssssssssssssssss
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NOTE TO READERS OF THE PREVIOUS COMMENT: In this context, "KKK" does in no way, shape, or form refer to the Klu Klux Klan.
Sorry Kaitlyn, just had to clarify that... XD
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Hahaha, thanks for the clarification.
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and the end... kind shows what's yet to come. You think?? I wonder... :9 xD
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And... yes. I do think. I'm not sure who it will end up happening to though. (Watch out, it's gonna end up being the 'm' who's left in the dust. If you know what I mean... lol)
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