Sonnet About California

Jan 04, 2006 15:15

Beauty in Lockets: A Postcard GreetingA breeze, soft spoken, meadows of heather ( Read more... )

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93002 January 4 2006, 20:32:39 UTC
congratulations.

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emeraldelan January 4 2006, 21:07:22 UTC
Imported skin - dark and nearly opaque.
On her mountain’s cheek, I kissed so lightly.
The coming of moons, my view they did take-
perched above dimming lights, I wept nightly.

That is my favorite part; it gave me the chills.
I can't begin to describe how much I love this, but it made California seem more than just a dream. And thank you for that.

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rinetoile January 4 2006, 22:00:40 UTC
it's taken me over a half hour to comment on this.
it calls for adventure.

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emo_leary January 4 2006, 23:10:06 UTC
sonnets!

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killer_x_queen January 5 2006, 02:25:40 UTC
muy bien

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