poem

[_greenme_]

this is one of the best poems i have read so far. tell me what you think about this person's poem.

Dissolved
I see for now our time is done.
Clouds now cover a friendly sun.
You never write or call to see
about how feelings fare in me.

I've written more than words can say.
Have gotten down on my knees and prayed.
You said that we would always be
the best of friends both you and me.

But, you decided not to write
or call to see if I'm alright.
I've cried too many tears for you.
And now I know love wasn't true.

So, take your friends on A.O.L.
They've been with you for quite a spell.
You say they are the one's that's true.
They'll never know the inner you.

You confide in me so little now.
To me I seem to wonder how
you ever took away your heart
that seemed to tear my heart apart.

Now it's time for me to ride.
I'll go some place; try and hide.
My heart’s been dampened with no sun.
There's no more time for having fun.

I knew the facts right from the start.
But, then you went and broke my heart.
I've broken the spell you had on me.
And now I know that I am free.

You lied to me when it mattered.
This heart of mine torn and shattered.
I'm sure one day my heart will mend
But as for now, our love now ends.

by N2dnitesky