Well, i dont want to mess with it at all. It's like i would write a big opening, and then just copy and paste (not really, i would change some words around to my liking) and then add an ending. My story is about a mute girl that becomes an ameteur porn star (maybe she's forced into it, haven't thought that up yet) and she's completely disqusted by it. After only like the second day she's ready to explode with anger for even agreeing to do any of it. Until she comes across an article in the news paper about a famous pornography photographer. And then this is where the story would take the POV from your character with everything you originally had, and in the end she take her anger out on him, and beats him up really bad. Poor guy.
Anyway, that's a rough idea of what it's going to be about, there's a lot more to it, and there's also things that need to be worked out that dont make a whole bunch of sense to me. But if you let me use it, i'd appreciate it, if not, i'll figure out something else.
I'm just trying to stay as close to your original idea as possible, to not ruin your greatness. Because that story is genius.
Anyway, that's a rough idea of what it's going to be about, there's a lot more to it, and there's also things that need to be worked out that dont make a whole bunch of sense to me. But if you let me use it, i'd appreciate it, if not, i'll figure out something else.
I'm just trying to stay as close to your original idea as possible, to not ruin your greatness. Because that story is genius.
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