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scentless_angel May 25 2005, 13:15:58 UTC
awwww!! i wanna cry! thinking back on how sweet and in love toby was in the beginning, it breaks my heart to know he's suffering so much.
and josie! argh, i wish she'd call him already. or well, one of them should. even if it's peter.

but they're so perfect together! i resent that big fights are inevitable with couples.

otherwise, i loved this part. you're such a brilliant writer!

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kellybrandybuck May 25 2005, 21:09:49 UTC
well well well.... this just won't do missy. Josie being called fat... no toby in sight??

BACK TO THE DRAWING BOARD... this cannot last!

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