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May Suck

May 02, 2006 21:30

once again i fall infatuated ( Read more... )

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kitestream May 3 2006, 20:01:53 UTC

kudos for the effort at a rhyme scheme. 'partaken' seems a bit forced, though. First stanza very nice. I'd maybe change to "too jaded" so that the grammar matches the next line.

I take it you had a run-in with the ex that didn't go well? Hope you're not stewing in it too much. The best revenge is to be okay without her.

_blueice_ May 3 2006, 20:26:26 UTC

You are a natural born critic! And you understand me perfectly. Should I propose to you (kidding)

kitestream May 3 2006, 20:31:15 UTC

Hey!! I'm not sure what that means.....I hope you're not taking it as being mean or judgmental. I always try to find something I can suggest to be improved upon - I figure a writer doesn't learn anything with the usual 'oh, that's so good.' I hate it when people do that to me. Not that I've been writing much recently......

_blueice_ May 3 2006, 20:39:24 UTC

I mean I appreciate. What you write and how you write - that helps me a lot.
REALLY

kitestream May 3 2006, 21:09:59 UTC

ok, good. One of the few skills I have seems to be my writing, so glad I can be helpful. :)

So what happened with the ex?? If you don't feel like talking about it, I understand.

_blueice_ May 3 2006, 21:33:25 UTC

Yes! Yes! YES! (mega-kudo for your writing)
As to ex... I'll tell you

_blueice_ May 3 2006, 21:34:34 UTC

She said: did you do anything to make me think of you in a different way? And so on...

kitestream May 3 2006, 21:58:03 UTC

Ummm, is that code for 'did you get your shit together'? That seems like a really crappy attitude, basically, I don't want to be there for you and help you figure things out, but if you did that on your own, then, hey, I'm all for the good times.

It's almost better when people you cared about do things like that. Makes it easier to write them off. But it's very hurtful in the short run. I'm so sorry you had to go through it.

_blueice_ May 3 2006, 22:04:54 UTC

Thanks for warming!
Yes it's very hurtful. It's like "tearing your soul away with a silky glove"

_blueice_ May 3 2006, 21:38:45 UTC

using www.pandora.com listen to Cat Power as music "similar to Tori Amos"

kitestream May 3 2006, 21:58:43 UTC

I got my sister Cat Power's The Greatest album. Great, isn't it?!

_blueice_ May 3 2006, 22:03:26 UTC

Most certainly! Most certainly!

Btw, whadd'ya think of the movie Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are dead?

kitestream May 9 2006, 18:00:23 UTC

Funny you should mention R&G. I haven't seen it since shortly after it was first on video, and it was on cable a few weeks ago; I was going to watch it again, but didn't get around to it. All I remember about it is that I liked it enough to watch it again. I'll have to keep a lookout for it on cable again.

_blueice_ May 9 2006, 18:12:02 UTC

It is OUTSTANDING
Why I reminded it - a friend of mine just acquainted

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