Stranded, Chapter 3

[_alicesprings]

Title: Stranded
Written By: _alicesprings
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Luke and Reid are on their way to their honeymoon when their plane hits some turbulence...
Author's Notes: I wrote the first draft of this for NaNoWriMo, which was a great challenge and lots of fun! I didn’t reach the 50k word count goal, but the fic is now complete and I'll be posting a chapter a

Comments

[theshahofblah]

OMG you're killing me with this fabulous fic.

First of all, REID. :(((((
Poor bb. He showed Luke the wedding pics. Luke so needed to see the two of them deliriously happy. Even though he can't remember, it's good for him to see the proof of their happiness. My heart just twisted 5 ways to sunrise when Reid didn't want to tell Luke about the proposal and I could just hug him for it. I mean, wow, kudos to him for not wanting to share something that runs so deep with 2010!Luke.

I'm very intrigued by the little bits of info we're getting about Reid's accident. It sounds like he may have had the run-in with the train, or otherwise something equally horrendous, and survived by the skin of his teeth. I like how you reveal this slowly and can't wait to find out more.

I love how Reid is just a frigging Ninja at fishing and yeah, go impress Luke already.
And I love Reid making yoga sexy, without even trying. :)

So secondly, Luke. :((((
Poor bb. He can't help but say things that will hurt Reid. I think you are doing an amazing job by being so true to 2010!Luke and married!Reid. They are in two different places and you're just conveying this so so convincingly and realistically. They are suffering in very different ways and both fearing that Luke may never overcome the amnesia, however, their fear is different. Reid fears he may never have the man back that loves him and Luke fears he may never remember or know the happiest years of his life, doomed to live with this massive gap. You've taken this to a a multi-layered story that's very moving.

So, Luke is really really attracted to Reid. I'm a tad suprised that after 21 days, he's not thought of or wanted to kiss him yet what with the way he's getting aroused at every single turn. Because if his body yearns for Reid and remembers yoga, what will happen if he kisses Reid? I would be curious, and with so little to do there but be aware of each other and of Reid's hotness, wit and manliness, wouldn't he start to obsess over it a little? Apart from the very pressing issues of OMG are we ever getting off and OMG will my pills run out before we are found and OMG will I ever regain my memory.

However, the wanting to kiss Reid (for starters) can't be far off now, what with him sneaking around and following Reid to the waterfall every chance he gets. I bet ya (and I hope) Reid knows he's being watched.

You and Rhi are my heroes with the Lure fics.

Thanks for another fantastic story, I'm so enjoying the ride. ;)

[_alicesprings]

Hee! Ninja!Reid! Love that! :D

And Reid making yoga sexy without even trying. He makes everything sexy without even trying! *dreamy sigh*

Thank you so much for the delightful feedback! Made my day! I'm so glad you're enjoying the slow reveal about the accident. You should get your answers in chapter 4. :)

I think you are doing an amazing job by being so true to 2010!Luke and married!Reid. They are in two different places and you're just conveying this so so convincingly and realistically. They are suffering in very different ways and both fearing that Luke may never overcome the amnesia

Thank you SO much! I'm thrilled you're enjoying the ride! :)