Blindfolds and Cigarettes

[_alex_the_great]

Searchlights shown bright on me tonight
Blindfolds and Cigarettes
Shots fired from guns for hire
Blindfolds and Cigarettes
Life splattered, these bullets all shatter
(This is) My massacre, My disaster
Heard from the rafters
"You don't matter"
Blindfolds and Cigarettes

This firing range is our familiar place
Excecute this warm embrace
Can time erase your poisoned hearts taste
Execute this once shared grace

The fold slips away revealing orbs of grey
Blindfolds and Cigarettes
Our crowd leaves theres no more need
Blindfolds and Cigarettes
The clouds have come and set, this cigarette is wet
(And now) My end met, draw the chalk silhouette
No words yet
No words for my regret
Blindfolds and Cigarettes

This firing range is our familiar place
Excecute this warm embrace
Can time erase your poisoned hearts taste
Execute this once shared grace

Fire! Fire! Fire! Fire!

So i wrote that a while ago, but i still feel like i need imput on it. Come on kids tell me yay or nay and why!