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May 08, 2005 23:47

Here's more of my story, which i forgot to label as "Til Death Do Us Part" .... proceed.

( Til Death Do Us Part: Prologue )

Comments 12

so_pseudogoth May 9 2005, 04:34:43 UTC

I laughed out loud with Bam pouring the milk into the cereal box... God, I've almost done that. And the whole conversation about the mattresses was so awesomely awkward, it was hilarious.

I'm liking this so far. Aww, Bammy in a tux...

jade_squirrel May 9 2005, 11:13:07 UTC

I second EVERYTHING you just said.

easily_amused69 May 9 2005, 19:08:11 UTC

Ah! u read my mind. guess what the next chapter will contain... yup shopping for suits!

andhelltowhite May 9 2005, 06:05:57 UTC

Oooh it's lovely! i can't wait to read more!

assyla_33 May 9 2005, 10:20:20 UTC

I like it a lot.
More soon?

chelsey45036 May 9 2005, 10:58:59 UTC

Its cute....I've poured milk in a box before..Whoops...LMAO.

mel_b666 May 9 2005, 12:25:16 UTC

Guah... That's all I have to say about the opening. [insert random noises of turn-on here]

That was deliciious. ^_^

easily_amused69 May 9 2005, 19:13:35 UTC

thanks. it was my first time writing smut.... kinda gave me a rush...*cough* 0_0