Half a World Away (Chapter 8)

[marjohn666valo]

Title: Half a World Away
Summary: The blood stains on his memories will never fade away; not even by the passage of time, or the reek of his regrets. He will never come back. He will never love him again.
Rating: R
Disclaimer: the title comes from a song by Secret Garden; and I assume everyone already knows that none of these ever happened.
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Comments

[bams_sweet_666]

Wow I can't get enough of this! I could read it over and over. You're truly extraordinary and you write like a master. Hope to see more from you sweetie <3

[marjohn666valo]

Thank you so much for your kind comment, darling. I'll try to finish the next chapter as soon as possible :D
I'm really glad you find my stories enjoyable <3

[lilafilly2]

Woah. Nice. Fantastic and heartwrenching. I've never read your story, but now Imma go back and read like, frantically.

[marjohn666valo]

oh, I'm really glad you liked it! and thank you very much for the comment. hope you find the rest of this fic as heartwrenching ;)

[annushkazhivago]

This is so sad. Poor Ville. I liked the last words he spoke. *sniffles and hugs Ville, then smacks Bam*
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter.

[marjohn666valo]

I really tried to make this as sad as possible, and yet not to make it too sappy. I was really doubtful about some parts, afraid that they would come across as sappy, but i hope that they didn't.

thank you so much for reading and commenting, luv :)

[fleur_de_ylang]

Are we approaching the end? Can't wait to see how you tie it all up together. Can there be possibly any merciful redemption for our Bam at all or are you gonna let him burn in flames of regrets and hatred towards himself in all eternity

[marjohn666valo]

We are indeed approaching the end, and for some reason chapter 9 refuses to be written!!! It's outrageous actually. I have almost finished chapter 10 and i don't know why chap.9 is being such a spoiled brat :D I think the mood is not just right yet, and that's why i can't come up with a good starting point.

At first, i just wanted to write this story through Bam's POV, to keep it more obscure, but then thought angst would work better for this plot than mystery. I hope i haven't overdone that.

Bam should be pitied, as only a truly evil character should be hated, and Bam is by no means evil, and all his wrongdoings are b/c of the circumstances and the fact that he's just a human, and a very unlucky one at that, too. :)

Thank you so much for sticking around darling. I hope the ending won't let you down.

P.S. Yuko's a mastermind. i asked her if Ville's being pleasured in this particular drawing and she sorta confirmed it ;)