Dyatlov Pass Sequel - All Our Passing Nights [Chapter 3/?]

[x_carnivale_x]

Title: Dyatlov Pass - All Our Passing Nights.
Author: x_carnivale_x
Pairing: Bam/Ville, et all.
Rating: R/NC17. for mentions of sex, violence, gore, and horror.
Summary: That is not dead which can eternal lie. And with strange aeons, even death may die.
Author's Notes: This chapter shows Bam's first dream, along with a good old angst-carnival. Do expect a lot

Comments

[nodaybuttoday6]

Ok, so. I never finished reading the original of this. I just went back and finished it.
And OMFG INTENSE. It actually made me jump at times, and I'm dying to read more of this sequel.
{I looked up the real incident, and man is that fricken creepy. O.O]

The part where he listened to Ville's voicemail....I almost lost it.

You rock. ♥

[slasher48]

This story hurts. I don't know how you can stand to write it or reread it. Every chapter leaves me in tears.

Admittedly, though, it's the sign of phenomenal prose when it affects you so deeply.

How do you do it? You convey a longing I've felt, an anger, a hopelessness... You can listen to their voice, but it's like a fairy's finger slipping along the very edge of a troll sized hole. Nothing filled, nothing helped. You just end up crying and feeling stupid about it.

You can't smell their clothes, because there is nothing worse than a smell that you have to force to surround you.

And you hate their burial site. It represents everything they weren't to you--dead, gone, buried underneath beautiful plants and forgotten except at every holiday.

I hurt so badly, and yet I ache for more.

And you wonder why I once called you Goddess.

[swirlsandstars]

"...Cross my heart."

And hope to die. Bam thought bitterly.

I think I started losing it at that point. I swear to God I have never cried so much when reading a fic as I did when Bam started listening to Ville's voice mail. How can you stand writing this? I'd be a total mess by the end of it. Honestly, you have an amazing talent for being able to elicit these emotions from people. I really don't know what else to say other than my heart hurts and I still want more. <3

[mieka_writes]

that's a very good question there Bammie. and a freaky nasty dream

[jenniferadkins3]

this brought tears to my eyes