Comments | __vam: Exasperation - prompts: drunk, bruises, bed sheets.

x_carnivale_x in __vam

Exasperation - prompts: drunk, bruises, bed sheets.

Mar 04, 2009 15:43

Title: Exasperation
Author: x_carnivale_x
Pairing: VAM.
Rating: NC17.
Prompts: drunk, bruises, bed sheets.
Summary: It's the middle of the party, and Ville has lost track of the time.
Author's Notes: So, I figured I hadn't posted some VAM much lately, I figured I'd contribute a bit of smut. :) This is actually written in present tense, which is something I don ( Read more... )

Comments 23

lillithvalo March 4 2009, 22:28:59 UTC

O.O

*thud*

x_carnivale_x March 5 2009, 04:43:21 UTC

Hahah, great reaction! Thanks so much. :)

xdevilsxangelsx March 4 2009, 22:39:11 UTC

O.O
umm...ummm... *remains speechless*

x_carnivale_x March 5 2009, 04:43:31 UTC

I like seeing people speechless. Thanks!

nodaybuttoday6 March 4 2009, 22:49:43 UTC

Goddamn. O.O

*thunk*

x_carnivale_x March 5 2009, 04:43:48 UTC

Haha, this seems to be the general consensus, I like it.

snuggalicious March 4 2009, 22:58:41 UTC

HOT SMUT!

Damn! I want that too :(
Very well written,not to smutty,makes you use your imagination.

HELL YEAH on the SEQUEL!! :)
I loved that story so,even though it was a sad ending.

x_carnivale_x March 5 2009, 04:44:29 UTC

I've been mulling over a lot of pretty good ideas for the sequel, so as of right now, it's just all a matter of getting it written.

slasher48 March 5 2009, 00:53:36 UTC

*hums "Ville's Coming and Never Coming Down" to the tune of "Santa Clause is Coming to Town"*

That was fucking brutal and brilliant. I love you so goddamn much for even writing it, much less posting it.

I think I take a particular liking to (beyond the gag) the thing you do in your writing where you don't actually vocally express Vocal Ville, but instead put it in there with the body language. Very well done.

Always love it, but this time, oh fuck, I'm tingling! (With love. ;))

x_carnivale_x March 5 2009, 04:45:22 UTC

I don't know, a lot of times I find that dialogue can take away from a scene, especially a sex scene, so usually if I have to have dialogue, I'll do it in a way that's got it mixed in with the scene or is more subtle. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I always love seeing your reviews. :3

slasher48 March 10 2009, 21:53:17 UTC

I do not disagree, but would like to add that if done well, a scene can also consist of dialogue and dialogue alone, so clearly it does not always.

I did very much enjoy it, and I promise, so long as I can get the time to write them, you will always have my reviews. :)

x_carnivale_x March 10 2009, 16:29:00 UTC

My dearest, slasher48, since I greatly appreciate your reviews, may I ask a favor of you? May I get you to read the comment from thehomicidehoe and give me your opinion on the matters she mentioned. Despite the fact that I feel rather insulted, mostly as there was no actual constructive feedback, I'd like to know your thoughts on the points she made as I just can't see the problems. [This is not an attempt to gang up on her/him btw. I'm just curious as to whether or not you can see these apparently drastic issues she is attempting to point out.] I'd love your feedback, dear.

Thread 5