The Barfly and the Butterfly
Part Four [of Four]
Author: Jordan [insane-pyro-grl]
Rating: PG-13 for language and alcohol use
Disclaimer: I do not own the boys, nor did this happen to them. Don’t sue, I’m a poor college student whose bank account is dwindling towards the red.
Summary: You’re the barfly. I’m the butterfly. If only we’d collide in
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poor baby
wonderful story
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lovely story! x
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*hugs you*
I knew you were the butterfly, love. (Where's this Bam of yours? I'll kick his ass. ;))
I loved that. You always write so well, but I'm enjoying the "new-freshman" feel to it. Fuck my life and "pregaming" are popular terms around here, and I like the way they're incorporated into this clearly college-era story.
I adore the last few scenes. I actually went through that during orientation.
A guy was holding me, making me feel safe and loved, but then he went back to his room to get his key so his roommate could lock it...and fell asleep.
I had no idea how he felt, and no idea if he left on purpose. It was horrible.
I didn't cry. But I did get rather upset.
Your wording, the repetition, it's perfect. I love the way you write. I always have, always will. This series was incredible. :D
heads*
♥
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The ending was so sad, just when you think it's all going to be okay and then it crumbles down around you.
Wonderful! *hugs*
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