finale: barfly and the butterfly;

Dec 02, 2008 14:51

The Barfly and the Butterfly
Part Four [of Four]
Author: Jordan [insane-pyro-grl]
Rating: PG-13 for language and alcohol use
Disclaimer: I do not own the boys, nor did this happen to them. Don’t sue, I’m a poor college student whose bank account is dwindling towards the red.
Summary: You’re the barfly. I’m the butterfly. If only we’d collide in ( Read more... )

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meduusje December 2 2008, 20:19:14 UTC
pulls wila into a hug
poor baby

wonderful story

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gothicrozza December 2 2008, 21:13:00 UTC
why can't it always have a happy ending? :( lol
lovely story! x

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slasher48 December 2 2008, 23:00:11 UTC
*hugs Ville*

*hugs you*

I knew you were the butterfly, love. (Where's this Bam of yours? I'll kick his ass. ;))

I loved that. You always write so well, but I'm enjoying the "new-freshman" feel to it. Fuck my life and "pregaming" are popular terms around here, and I like the way they're incorporated into this clearly college-era story.

I adore the last few scenes. I actually went through that during orientation.

A guy was holding me, making me feel safe and loved, but then he went back to his room to get his key so his roommate could lock it...and fell asleep.

I had no idea how he felt, and no idea if he left on purpose. It was horrible.

I didn't cry. But I did get rather upset.

Your wording, the repetition, it's perfect. I love the way you write. I always have, always will. This series was incredible. :D

heads*

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fizzy64 December 3 2008, 18:33:26 UTC
Oh that was amazing!

The ending was so sad, just when you think it's all going to be okay and then it crumbles down around you.

Wonderful! *hugs*

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liviadetettall July 18 2012, 11:46:04 UTC
SO MUCH LOVE FOR THIS :O!!!!!!!!

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