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[lovesarequiem]

Title: On the Roof
Author: lovesarequiem
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: This could be vam but the storyline is left open to interpretation
Disclaimer: I own nothing, not even the laptop I'm writing on. The boys own themselves, unfortunately.

Been a while hasn't it? This came to me the other day and wouldn't leave until I'd got it on the page.

Summary:

Comments

[slasher48]

NO criticisms.

Maybe a few mechanics mistakes, but the plot was fantastic.

I love you! I'm so sorry I haven't replied to you yet, but I will!

Hope you write me more soon! :)

[lovesarequiem]

Mechanics are a pain, there's only so many punctuation marks available to use, in my opinion there should be more but thanks for pointing it out. I'll try harder in the future!
The plot... nope, no clue where that came from but I'm not one to look a gift horse in the mouth (whatever the hell that means)

I love you too and it's cool, take your time, I'm in no rush

I'll try
xx

[slasher48]

Completely understand you there, lovely. Mechanics ARE a pain, but those who read tend to take you more seriously the fewer flaws in mechanics you have.

You're welcome, sweetheart. (By now, I'd hope you'd expect me to. ;))

*chuckles* Just means you're not one to try to explain the inexplicable miracles like inspirational ideas. ;)

♥!

Fantastic!

XOXO

[xthebutcherx]

I love it!!
Its such a good plot line
keep up the good work

[lovesarequiem]

Thanks, I seem to have a penchant for odd plots but it's entertaining to make them work
xx

[lovesarequiem]

Thankyou, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Different? No kidding, when I was bouncing the plot off a friend she asked me if I could 'write anything normal for a change?' What do you think, should I carry on with things that are 'different' or not? (Though that begs the question, can I actually write anything normal anymore? Somehow I don't think so)
xx

[lilafilly2]

Perfect loverly. I think that's one of the more orignal Vams I've ever read. Simply.. Love it!

[lovesarequiem]

Really? Aw, you made me blush, thankyou!
xx

[villegirl17]

I like this it's sweet and for all we know could have some truth hehe!

[lovesarequiem]

Thanks, yep it could be true though not very likely
xx