Comments | __vam: You wont admit it, but its true, I'm happy without you...

unloved_metal in __vam

You wont admit it, but its true, I'm happy without you...

Sep 17, 2008 19:19

TITLE:While You Sleep.
AUTHOR: ( Read more... )

Comments 13

xdevilsxangelsx September 17 2008, 18:35:15 UTC

Awe so sweet :)

unloved_metal September 17 2008, 18:38:53 UTC

Christ that was one QUICK reply!!

Thanks uber much!!

Love the icon by the way!

meduusje September 17 2008, 19:00:04 UTC

adorable!

unloved_metal September 18 2008, 20:23:56 UTC

Thanks

fizzy64 September 17 2008, 20:13:35 UTC

Awww that was gorgeous.

I love the way Ville [*hopes she got the POV right*] reaches to get Bam's arm, murmuring his name, it was adorable.

Lovely drabble :]

villegirl17 September 17 2008, 20:54:42 UTC

at first i thought it was Ville but then the line about looking like a god made me go "ok it's Bam's P.O.V." i loved this!!

unloved_metal September 18 2008, 20:26:24 UTC

I'm glad you liked it!

villegirl17 September 18 2008, 23:01:55 UTC

oh definitely.

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unloved_metal September 18 2008, 20:27:20 UTC

Thanks.

patchy4vam September 18 2008, 15:27:25 UTC

I loved this =D

I mostly love how (despite the line about looking like a god) it can be whatever PoV you want it to be =) I like that about oneshots, drabbles etc. It gives the reader the option to use their imagination =)

Good job! =D

unloved_metal September 18 2008, 20:31:18 UTC

Yeah,

Thats the kind or one shot I like to write.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

P.S, I love your icon!