Midnight Blackness Prologue

[unloved_metal]

Name; Midnight Blackness

Disclaimer; Don’t know, Don’t own, Please don’t sue,

Summary; Things just started to get back to normal, before the phone rang.

Authors Note; I am starting to get use to the whole, “ writing for an audience” thing. But I am finding it difficult, because I cant do prose, only songs. But I need to improve my personal writing,

Comments

[snuggalicious]

I want to say continue..but Ville dying *shakes head* just no

I will still read it :)

continue please..

[unloved_metal]

its a tragedy, so death was inevitabe. i hope you enjoy chapter one. i will be posting it soon.

[unloved_metal]

hiya. im glad you like. sorry, the italics are a one off. its only the prologue. ill be posting chap one in a few days...

[jezebel1386]

*mouth hanging open like a fish*

And you stop THERE of all places?

Not very nice of you!

You might want to edit this before you post. There are a few simple spelling and grammatical mistakes to fix (*unreally should be *really) and things like that, but otherwise, this was good.

[unloved_metal]

its a cliff hanger. its to keep the readers interested... im new to this... sorry bout the spelling, its not my strong point...

[slasher48]

damned*

he* forgot

Oh, no. Oh, please tell me everything's alright.

I like it. It needs to be developed, ASAP. ^^

[unloved_metal]

hiya. i will be posting chap one soon. im glad you like. keep reading

[vammie]

*hugs oneself*
D8

Don't die Ville!!!

Hurry up -- UPDATE lol

Great story so far, I'll definitelly(sp?) be watching....er.....reading, this one

[unloved_metal]

aw, Thanks. im only new so this (gesures to all the comments)means a lot to me... i will be posting the first chap soon...