A Love Divided - Chapter 16

[non_timebo_mala]

Title: A Love Divided - Chapter 16
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[death_to_preps7]

i wanna know the secret!!!!

good chapter...suspence is your good point...
keeping us coming back for more

very good hun!!!

[death_to_preps7]

yay me first fc!!!

*does fc dance*

[non_timebo_mala]

Congrats on FC! *Dances with you* xD

Aw, thanks. I never thought of that as one of my good points, just something I did sometimes. xD

Thank you!
<3

[death_to_preps7]

your welcome!!!
but thats one of the best qualities, in my oppinion, that a writer needs, a way to keep their reads coming back for more

and the most easyest way is suspence and you do it wonderfully

[xvalo666x]

No! the suspense is killing me.. i wann know so bad!!
update soon! its really good.

[non_timebo_mala]

Don't worry, all shall be revealed soon. xD

Thank you so much!

[slasher48]

YOU WITHHELD THE SECRET?! ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!

And I'M the evil one?

Fuck, man. Adrenaline rush.

Please. PLEASE. PLEEEEEASE. MORE.

I love you so soooooo much. Please more. Please. *grabs onto your waist and begs you with puppy dog eyes* o.o

♥!

[non_timebo_mala]

Oh, babe, you just /know/ I would have to hold it out for one more chapter, right? ;)

Yes, you still are evil. I'm just more so at this point. xD

Like jumping off a cliff!...Not that I've done that.

I will post more soon. Promise.

EEEEEEEEE! *ish grabbed* Awww no! Not puppy eyes. *looks away and sniffles* I can't resist those. Ever.
Thank you so much. :)

[slasher48]

I do. You have learned so well, grasshopper. *bows*

I am. I know! You ARE! *a bit jealous, a lot impressed* ;)

I know! Neither have I. *dives under the table to avoid the probing questions*

Good! I'm dying here!

Yesh! Puppy eyes! *nuzzles your hip and gives you more puppy dog eyes*

You're very very welcome, sweetheart.

[joijoy]

I am sitting on my bed with my heart in my throat!
I am really scared for Ville and Bam!
I am sad also! I feel like this SECRET is going
to be something horrible! Shame on Dunn!
I can't even begin to put into words
how evil Jonna is! *hate her for hitting Ville*
Please Sweetheart update soon!
The suspense is making my tummy hurt! :/
Love you! XOX =D

[non_timebo_mala]

Oh, honey please don't be too scared! All will be revealed soon!

I just hope 'the secret' lives up to expectations and isn't just something you go "oh..well..whatever." It might be, but I hope not. I came up with it with an online friend so *shrugs* I'm not sure.

Thank you!
*hands you a Tums*

[jezebel1386]

So not cool.

You're lucky I love you, or I would definitely resort to throwing things.

*growls* I hate Jonna on a good day, but this bitch is intolerable. And bringing Dunn in on the scheme? What the hell???

Anyway, as I have said, can't wait to hear this secret...

What could possibly be so bad?

[non_timebo_mala]

Yes, I'm very lucky. *puts down pillow* I was hiding behind my shield. xD

Yeah, I know, Dunn is...confused, to say the least. *le sigh* He shall explain himself though.

The secret, as said above, will hopefully live up to expectations. :)

Well...it would ruin something, that's for sure.