Hymn of the Caged - New Story - Ch. 1

[non_timebo_mala]

Title: Hymn of the Caged
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[kymburrlee]

I like this first chapter. It definitely has great potential.

Oooh, so Ville is kept hidden away in some creepy old person's house? Hmmm, I wonder how Bammie is going to get to him? Bam's already smitten just by the voice. Can't blame the boy. ;)

I look forward to the next chapter! ♥

[non_timebo_mala]

Tee hee, all shall be revealed in time...
No to creepy old-but-not-really-old people! Gah! xD

Thank you, I'll try to get it up sometime after I updaters my other one.

[vthessv]

will be interesting to see what happens next.
rescue Ville from the crazy ppl!!!

[non_timebo_mala]

AAAAAAAAAA! Crazy people, no! xD Lol
Thanks for commenting.

[jezebel1386]

Bam is hilarious in this!

Humping the wall, knocking the towels down, classic Margera things to do.

*hands you one of the muffins I baked*

(Something to munch on while you write me some more, hehe)

[non_timebo_mala]

Thank you, such a great compliment! *cries*

Yeah, I thought it seemed kind of Bam-ish xD

Oooooh muffins! Yay! *eats and glomps*

Thankieeees!

[deeperintodark]

Oh wow, this is really cool.

Can I have more?

[non_timebo_mala]

Thank you!

Not at this moment, will a cookie suffice? *hands you cookies*
I shall try to have more soon. xD

[slasher48]

Bam is so Bam in this.

The great thing about Bam is that I need no further explanation when I say that.

I can't wait to see his curiosity overwhelm him, and when it does, he'll break into that lady's house and steal Ville away. :D

You cannot be a beginner. No. Fucking. Way. You're way too good.

♥ Rapidly growing to love you :)

[non_timebo_mala]

Thank you! That is such a great compliment.

Haha, yes! Steal him away! Muhahahaha.

Oh, but I am. :P My other story is my first ever Vam story ever - well, my first ever slash story, actually. I used to write other fanfics that wasn't slash...

Aw, thank you. Lovers you too. <3

[slasher48]

No problem. He really is. Humping the wall and dropping towels on purpose, such Bam things to do. XD.

YES! STEAL HIM! GET HIM! *cheers*

You are? Impossible. You have serious, serious talent then. More talent than even some of the more practiced writers on here.

Awesome ♥

Soon it will be just love you. Just you wait. ;)

[non_timebo_mala]

Not even kidding. In fact - please don't beat me, it was my old ways - I used to /hate/ gays and thought the whole slash fandom was disgusting. xD But man, was I so young and naive. It's the greatest thing eva! lol

Oh my, I don't believe that! I believe that maybe I'm just a...semi-pro? xD Lol. If there is such a thing.