Wives Are For Business, Nothing Else - Chapter.10

Dec 13, 2007 13:52

TITLE: Wives Are For Business, Nothing Else ( Read more... )

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sjpheartshim December 13 2007, 22:14:56 UTC
Yay, I'm happy you updated! I really don't like Missy in this, she's too catty. But April made up for it with her sweetness.

Now go and update the other fic or I will poke you until you do =P *poke*

Oh and near the end you put "But he couldn’t stop him from going, acting was in the green eyed mans blonde, just as directing was in his..." I think you meant blood not blonde.

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bloodhill December 13 2007, 22:21:36 UTC
Yeah, I didn't really want to make Missy like that, it just sort of happened.
I want April to be overly sweet in this, a stereotypical 1950's mother.
Heh, I'll update it tonight I think. ^_^
Thanks for pointing it out, I fixed it.
I don't know how I missed it, thats why I usually use a beta. ^^;
Thanks for reading and commenting.

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loki_the_sinner December 13 2007, 22:36:50 UTC
This rocks, You rock, The Vam rocks and I love this story!
^that made close to no sense^
Love it!
And please do update the other story...
It reminds me of Lolita, which is not only my nickname but one of my favorite books!!!!

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bloodhill December 14 2007, 01:24:51 UTC
hehe, Thanks, I'm glad you like it. ^_^
The other story should be updated later tonight.
Cool, I'll look into that book.

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kymburrlee December 13 2007, 22:43:56 UTC
Aww, April is too sweet.
But Missy...well not so much. -_- Oh well, every story has to have it's villan.
Awww! I love that Ville and Bam are really starting to get closer. Yay!

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bloodhill December 14 2007, 01:27:51 UTC
Yes, sadly I made Missy the villain in this story.
I wanted them to get pretty close before he leaves, then Act II will start. ^_^
Thanks for reading and commenting. ♥

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trollsttroll December 13 2007, 23:16:47 UTC
Yay for you updating this! *clings* My brain is mush today else I'd comment better...

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bloodhill December 14 2007, 01:29:37 UTC
I'm glad you liked it.
All comments are good comments. ^_^

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crimsonyght666 December 14 2007, 00:20:12 UTC
I was so excited to see this update. ^^
It was great to see more of this, and even if this comment is on the sucky side, I'll post it anyways.
Loved it, as always. Made me squee to read that Bam was starting to have 'strong feelings' for Ville.
:)
Hope to read more soon.
xxx

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bloodhill December 14 2007, 01:34:15 UTC
Thank You, I'm glad you liked it. ^_^
Bam needs to get strong feelings before Ville leaves its my plan for things.
More soon, I hope. ♥

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