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The First Step Is Admitting (5/10)

Nov 21, 2007 06:50

Tittle: The First Step Is Admitting
POV: Third
Pairing: VAM!!!
Notes: Slash.
Spin The Bottle.
I was going to post this along with the sixth chapter, but my dad got pissy with me.
Rating: PG-13 (it changed back)
Comments: Are love
Disclaimer: If I owned any of them, I'd be over the moon.

Previous chapters:
Chapter one: http://community.livejournal.com/ ( Read more... )

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hilson_is_love November 21 2007, 06:37:45 UTC

Thanks!!!

Yay!

I'm having lots of fun writing chapter six. *evil grin*

xx

lipslikejon November 20 2007, 21:08:27 UTC

oooooooooooooooooooooooo shit. spin the bottle.
Love the anticipation. can't wait for more!!!

hilson_is_love November 21 2007, 07:00:12 UTC

Thanks :)

Yay!

Spin The Bottle!!

xx

slasher48 November 20 2007, 21:50:47 UTC

Yey. Spin the Bottle.

Can't wait for more, darling!

Shweet.

hilson_is_love November 21 2007, 06:57:35 UTC

Thank you! :)

Having fun (lots and lots of fun) writing the next chapter.

xx

slasher48 November 21 2007, 07:01:55 UTC

Oh so welcome.

Hehehehe. I feel ya there. The possibilities steal my breath sometimes. ;)

XOXOXO

hilson_is_love November 21 2007, 11:42:20 UTC

slasher48, you just gave me an idea!

Thanks :)

xoxoxoxo

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Re: haha hilson_is_love November 21 2007, 06:48:24 UTC

Hehee

More coming. Me having lots of fun writing the Spin The Bottle chapter. *muhaha*

xx

lilafilly2 November 21 2007, 00:40:52 UTC

I love the gin thingy. I dunno why, but my teacher would be proud of me for spotting alliteration, even one so tiny as that.

BTW, there was this line you put in the third chapter that goes..

"If you want me, come and claim me."

Is that from a movie. I know I've heard it somewhere.

hilson_is_love November 21 2007, 06:46:41 UTC

Lol, thanks :)

Is it?
Oh yeah! (Geez, I was zoned out when I wrote that, wasn't I?) Thanks for spotting!
Oops.
It's from a LOTR movie. But it was originally "If you want him, come and claim him." Said by Arwen after Frodo was stabbed in the arm by the Ringwraths in The Fellowship Of The Ring. (As well as being a slash writer, I'm a LOTR geek.)
But I changed it to suit the chapter. The evil, smut, cliffhanger chapter.

xx

lilafilly2 November 22 2007, 19:24:56 UTC

*ish happy-shiny-joy-ness*

Another LOTR geek! Gah, I knew it was a woman who had siad it, or something similar, but I couldn't remember!

Sheesh, I'm so proud of meself now! *does jig*