High School Vam Ch. 2

[bloodrazorblade]

 Disclaimer: If I owned them then I sure as hell wouldn't be making up silly stories, now would I? Don't sue, I'm broke.
Rating:PG[bad language]
Summary: High school vam...um yeah can't think of a summary...

I chewed on my pen thoughtfully, reading over what I had written.

You had demons to kill within you screaming
With a gun loaded with guilt you

Comments

[anonymous]

awwww isn't that cute ^__^

ahhh, teenage love<3

great job! more soon? ; )

[yellay_27]

oops that was me up there...forgot to log in XD

[bloodrazorblade]

congrats on your FC! *hands you vammie trophy*

[bloodrazorblade]

i know isn't it sweet?
=]
of course
i love writing this story
tommorow more then likely
♥

[bleedxwell]

Okay, I'm reading this and getting the gist of it. Though, try and descirbe like the art class and what Bam and Ville look like. Give it a bit more depth. Don't be afraid to add detail. It's good to do that time to time. Yes while dialouge is needed (in some intances not) It also could use discription.

(Again just more con-crit!^^)

[bloodrazorblade]

the art class is next hun.
i just couldn't resist ending at that line.
i will make the next one more descriptive and longer!
a promise to you all!

[bleedxwell]

Alrighty! ^^

I hope I'm helping you out! ^^

[bloodrazorblade]

you most certainly are, love.
i'm writing the next chapter right now.
♥

[valosdarling]

ehehehe, "anything for a cute finnish boy"
AINT THAT THE TRUTH LOVE!!
cant wait for more darling!

[bloodrazorblade]

you like my story? *is extremely happy*
you're one of my fave authors on here!
=]
it most certainly is.
♥

[chelsey45036]

Eekk! :]

[bloodrazorblade]

lol.
is that a good eekk or bad eekk?
=D
♥

[chelsey45036]

Good. to the tee.

<333

[poisongirlfawn]

Hey! Nice Chapter! My only suggestion is to have more details! Other that that, it's awesome, love!

[bloodrazorblade]

thanks hun.
=]
♥