Screaming

[loki_the_sinner]

Title: Screaming
Author: Loki_the_Sinner
Summary: Ville hates that the screaming never stops.
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone, I wish I did, but sadly I dont...
Rating: PG-13 a little swearing
A/N: This story is really abstract so it doesn't make the most sense in the world. I wrote it during Math because I finnished my test early.

Comments

[dyingforyourluv]

This was...different. I really like the concept of it, and the imagery seems like it has great potential. I really like how fast it moves--haha, most people hate that--but it works for this story. It kindof reminds me of something Chuck Palahniuk would write.

There are a lot of spelling and grammar errors in this...but I ignored them for the sake of the story.
=P

[jonne_darling]

I like deing different so tahnkyou

And DAMN YOU MICROSOFT WORD SPELLCHECKER!! its being dumb and wont work...
I hate my computer sometimes!

[jonne_darling]

being* thank you* my dog is humping my leg...
There is a reason my spelling is so bad and its my dog who was trying to hump my leg and was distracting me...
Nasty lil perv...
Yes my dog is gay to...

Also sry about the user name switch it might happen a lot...
but I am Loki

[dyingforyourluv]

Don't worry about it. Think of it this way: fanfiction is like a stepping stone to real, professional writing. You still have time to perfect your craft, and it's the style that's most important. Spelling and grammar will come with time, but having your own style shows what kind of potential you have--and I definately see that in the way you string words together.
=D

[whocares10315]

is ur icon from robin hood: men in tights?
if not, i'm sorry for being a creeper.
if yes, i love that movie..and i'm still sorry for kinda just...noticing ur icon <3 lol.

[dyingforyourluv]

It most certainly is.
♥