Screaming

[loki_the_sinner]

Title: Screaming
Author: Loki_the_Sinner
Summary: Ville hates that the screaming never stops.
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone, I wish I did, but sadly I dont...
Rating: PG-13 a little swearing
A/N: This story is really abstract so it doesn't make the most sense in the world. I wrote it during Math because I finnished my test early.

Comments

[mildly_neurotic]

Wow trippy. It was nice that April came and got them even if they are nuts. This is one of those stories that leaves a million questions buzzing in your brain. It's very cool.

[loki_the_sinner]

Yes trippy, Veeeerrryyy trippy...
I know but I love that kind of story,
Where you have no idea whats going on, but you love it anyway...

[dyingforyourluv]

This was...different. I really like the concept of it, and the imagery seems like it has great potential. I really like how fast it moves--haha, most people hate that--but it works for this story. It kindof reminds me of something Chuck Palahniuk would write.

There are a lot of spelling and grammar errors in this...but I ignored them for the sake of the story.
=P

[jonne_darling]

I like deing different so tahnkyou

And DAMN YOU MICROSOFT WORD SPELLCHECKER!! its being dumb and wont work...
I hate my computer sometimes!

[jonne_darling]

being* thank you* my dog is humping my leg...
There is a reason my spelling is so bad and its my dog who was trying to hump my leg and was distracting me...
Nasty lil perv...
Yes my dog is gay to...

Also sry about the user name switch it might happen a lot...
but I am Loki

[dyingforyourluv]

Don't worry about it. Think of it this way: fanfiction is like a stepping stone to real, professional writing. You still have time to perfect your craft, and it's the style that's most important. Spelling and grammar will come with time, but having your own style shows what kind of potential you have--and I definately see that in the way you string words together.
=D

[lillithvalo]

WOW THIS WAS GREAT!!... No more crazy Dr. and drugs.. i'm glad they got to go home...

[loki_the_sinner]

I like how you picked up on where they were.
I had a bunch of my friends from school read it and none of them could figure it out...
I really didn't think it was to hard to pick up on.

[whocares10315]

wow. i liked the abstract writing! it made it all the more powerful. you wrote this after a math test?
can you finish math tests early more often? xoxo <3 loved it doll.

[nimir_ra81]

Wow...that was really different! I loved it sweetheart.
*adds to memories*

[loki_the_sinner]

Well thank you!