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shadowtheo in __vam

STORY!!-oneshot but could be more(?)

Feb 28, 2007 13:24

title:Shattered ( Read more... )

Comments 20

rebbolia February 27 2007, 23:19:36 UTC

Do you know what got me: "...had wrapped myself around him like a shadow of a thought before I could feel time swing back around us."

That had me captivated. I love the poetry in this. And yes, I am listening to 'Beautiful', though I did have to rummage around and find my headphones so as not to wake everyone up. I feel all romantic and poetical now. Thanks for that. Made me smile.

shadowtheo February 28 2007, 09:55:36 UTC

teehee! thankyou im so glad u liked it...and sorry about you having to find the headphones^-^;

marilynvalo February 27 2007, 23:27:49 UTC

I like it :) Would definitely read if you continued. And I took you're advice with the music it did make it more dramatic.

shadowtheo February 28 2007, 09:56:20 UTC

cool thanks a lot!

nailsnoir777 February 27 2007, 23:51:02 UTC

omg! how sweet and sad. great job---i look forward to reading more of your posts.:)

shadowtheo February 28 2007, 09:56:54 UTC

yay! makes me happy thanks!

mildly_neurotic February 28 2007, 00:51:19 UTC

I think it was lovely.

shadowtheo February 28 2007, 09:57:35 UTC

thankyou!

musicophilia February 28 2007, 02:00:31 UTC

I liked that. It would be interesting to read more and see where it goes...

shadowtheo February 28 2007, 09:58:12 UTC

thanks, i will continue!