Bahind These Eyes: Prologue

[wolf_of_shadow]

The forest green eyes of an unusually pale man stared blankly at the mottled white hotel ceiling. His head pounded with each thought that crossed his mind and his stomach rebelled against him as soon as he tried to move. One thought remained dominant in the Finn’s mind as he lay there on the lumpy bed, he really, really shouldn’t have had so much

Comments

[blueandbrady]

Oh I definitely like this.
Your first huh? Not bad so far. I love the detail and description. I love being able to read the moods and see their expressions ect. It actually felt real.
Nice job. Keep it up.

[hottgrl1289]

Great Start, can't wait for more

[sobescorpio86]

I like it.
It's a great start to, I'm sure, a great fic.
Keep it up. =)

[wiccan_goth]

sounds really good
cant wait for more

[wlcm2obssn]

Ohhh I love it cannot wait to see more of this.