Thank you. Well I had to do my research and stuff just so I know what the hell Im talking and going on about. I dont rlly like making myself look like an idiot. (even though I do almost all the time... its just embaressing...) I usually just use facts and stuff that I find that mostly come from the bible but some of the stuff I make up, like the whole lucifer bringing one of the mirrors to hell with him and stuff. Thanks for reading =]
Oh...my...fucking...god. Yep...that basically sums it all up for me, lol. Anyways, on to the actual comment. This is an incredible story so far. I love how there are no real big 'time gaps' or 'wormholes'. His thoughts are very steady and complete, and very interesting. It's giving a solid background so things make sense to explain his situation and the way he is feeling. I also love the way you are respecting other religions. Like in a subtle and brief way you mention how reincarnation and pagen gods exist. If this story reflects your religious views at all, darling you are all-fucking-knowing. I am really fascinated by this plot line. Your style of writing also deserves mention. It's elegant, but simple and understandable. You don't use unneccessarily large words. Anyways, here is where my senseless rambling and praises come to an end. So, until your next chapter, adieu!
omfg longest comment I have ever had. awww thank you so much, your going to make me cry...(well actually I hardly ever cry more like saying i will but I cant... but u understand what I mean...) *gives u the biggest hug ever.* ^^ I'm actually trying to get this published into an actual book because the original story I don't use the characters Bam and Ville, I have my own made up characters, but since I wanted to make a second version I made it so it was Ville and Bam also. God usually I see the way I write crappy, but compared to my other stories those are complete peices of shit. Thanks sweetheart, you made my night. =]
Haha! I love hugs! WEWT! Anywho, I understand your delimma. I usually hate my own writing, but everyone else loves it so I'm like wtf is wrong with you people? But depending on length and how this story goes, I could totally see it worth publishing. It's not just hot sex and love triangles. I mean this is fascinating! I'd love to read the original story, too. If you wouldn't mind *bats eyelashes cutely* Actually, that's impossible for me. I'm far from cute...atleast I think so. Hmm, funny how different my view is from society's..But I digress. You're very welcome for the comment. You completely deserved it!
I know thats what I think. But see It kinda gets old the whole stories where they ruch things to early in the story and stories r not about the sex and love triangles, what I've always liked about stories is that it has to intrest me and make me want to read more, and alot all I see anymore is all basically around the same, sure different plotline (and some I find rlly funny) but taking things slow in a book is what makes it great... The original story is the same just Ville, Bam or any1 else related to them friends what have you, I have my own charcters, Vadin, Ceraun, and some others, though I am planning on making this story pretty long... Thank you again. =]
I just read all of it now, and I love this story. I figured 6 chapters of a new story would calm me down after 4 hours at a coffee house with a very gay man. I'm just amazed. I love stories involving angel's, mainly because there are so many different perspectives about heaven, and the fallen angels. Lol this comment is getting to long for me, mine normal consist of 'great update' or 'good story', but people who can write a story with a plot, that doesn't just involve sex, deserve long, and rambling comments.
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Yep...that basically sums it all up for me, lol. Anyways, on to the actual comment.
This is an incredible story so far. I love how there are no real big 'time gaps' or 'wormholes'. His thoughts are very steady and complete, and very interesting. It's giving a solid background so things make sense to explain his situation and the way he is feeling. I also love the way you are respecting other religions. Like in a subtle and brief way you mention how reincarnation and pagen gods exist. If this story reflects your religious views at all, darling you are all-fucking-knowing. I am really fascinated by this plot line. Your style of writing also deserves mention. It's elegant, but simple and understandable. You don't use unneccessarily large words. Anyways, here is where my senseless rambling and praises come to an end. So, until your next chapter, adieu!
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