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snow

Dec 13, 2006 21:22

* Snow *

By: Jordan (insane_pyro_grl)
Date Written: December 8th, 2006
Disclaimer: As real as Frosty the Snowman, who was a holly jolly soul
Notes: The saddest out of the 26 so far, and no one even dies in this one.
Summary: He walks as the snow dances around him on a cold winter morning, thinking of what happened and the things to come.

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Comments 7

nailsnoir777 December 13 2006, 22:09:10 UTC

awesomely sad. i couldn't help thinking that it would be neat to do a winter sad/slash fic set in findland b/c the sun never rises for like 2 hrs in the winter... sorry that was babble. lol. great work

nailsnoir777 December 13 2006, 22:09:23 UTC

fc hooray!

snowisgreat December 13 2006, 22:37:11 UTC

I don't know if maybe I'm just a bit emotional tonight but that was beautiful. The combination af snow and I love you is half a milimeter (that's very little for those of you using other measures :D) away from making a tear roll down my cheek.
Oops, just read it again and now the tear is there... I think I'm very emotional tonight, don't mind me!

I love the ending, it leaves so many possibilities open - does he leave because he doesn't believe the I love you, or is he leaving because he believes it? Does he leave at all? Being in the mood I'm in I think the saddest - he leaves because he believes them and he does indeed leave... That's just me though.
:)

none_more_dead December 13 2006, 23:11:49 UTC

You wrote *hugs*

You're my favourite little angst-whore, you know that? Your stories always tear me to pieces if they're angsty, or make me feel fuzzy and warm inside if they're fluff.

insane_pyro_grl December 14 2006, 00:33:09 UTC

*huggles back*

Aww thank you, at least I'm someone's favorite. I'm so glad I have someone that likes my writing as much as my friends do on here. And actually, I have like 3 prompts already done and just need to be typed, and have one I started in my Sociology class today. Expect more soon my dear.

♥♥♥♥♥

none_more_dead December 14 2006, 13:27:58 UTC

Yay! More fic!

Pretty anonymous December 14 2006, 04:43:03 UTC

Very pretty! BTW, does anybody know the link to a story that was on here called 'Pirates of the HIMibbean' (kind of a crossover b/w POTC and VAM) I'm not really sure if it is even on here anymore. help?