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[bam_valo666]

I decited to actully write something so here it is please be nice its my first

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[valorose]

Bless that's kinda cute. What age are they supposed to be?

[bam_valo666]

9 or 10 around there :)

[me_4_ever]

I saw a few grammer mistakes, you might want to go back and re-read a few bits to fix them. I also think that you might want to consider not writing So and so said, "whatever"

I can tell you put effort into this so i commend you. :-)
It's kind of cute though.

[bam_valo666]

Thanks for the pointers. I'll work harder on the next :)

[wide_eyed_raven]

I think this is cute :p

[bam_valo666]

thanks :)

[elterriblefizzy]

The cuteness.