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Jul 29, 2006 18:22

I decited to actully write something so here it is please be nice its my first ( Read more... )

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valorose July 30 2006, 01:45:25 UTC
Bless that's kinda cute. What age are they supposed to be?

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bam_valo666 July 30 2006, 02:21:29 UTC
9 or 10 around there :)

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me_4_ever July 30 2006, 01:58:02 UTC
I saw a few grammer mistakes, you might want to go back and re-read a few bits to fix them. I also think that you might want to consider not writing So and so said, "whatever"

I can tell you put effort into this so i commend you. :-)
It's kind of cute though.

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bam_valo666 July 30 2006, 02:22:12 UTC
Thanks for the pointers. I'll work harder on the next :)

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wide_eyed_raven July 30 2006, 02:14:52 UTC
I think this is cute :p

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bam_valo666 July 30 2006, 02:22:37 UTC
thanks :)

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elterriblefizzy July 30 2006, 15:23:11 UTC
The cuteness.

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