"Crawling Backwards" Ch 17

Jul 24, 2006 21:37

Title: Crawling Backwards
Author: 616HasGotAName
Fandom: Music/VAM
Summery: Ville is in love with Bam, but Bam only loves Ville when he’s drunk. By morning it’s forgotten and Bam goes on to believe that they’re still just friends. Ville puts up with it for his love, but it’s slowly killing him inside.
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Pairing: VAM…eventually.
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It didn't suck. belladevelours July 25 2006, 02:19:06 UTC
I think you did a wonderful job with the descriptions and Ville's moods. I spent an entire summer watching most of my friends become monsters from that shit and it's not pretty.

Can't wait for the next update.

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belladevelours July 25 2006, 02:20:57 UTC
Oh yeah, FC!


... )

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616hasgotaname July 25 2006, 03:34:43 UTC
Yeah, I know a few people that have been fucked over by it too. So I'm trying to play off of that a bit. Thanks for the awesome comment, it made my day! And congrats on FC. That's an adorable little dance...thing.

=D

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annushkazhivago July 25 2006, 04:13:29 UTC
I myself loved the chapter. I thought Bam was going to beat the shit out of him when he came up stairs... hmmm a new summary I'll have to think about that one.

I was going to write some on my story today I had out my wordpad and was ready to type but then I had to stop by vam and read that depressing disheartening post, if its not stories, pics or tv related I'm not looking at it anymore.

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616hasgotaname July 25 2006, 04:18:37 UTC
Yeah, I try to stear clear of all the b.s. that goes on around here. It gets taxing. But you should write, it'll help. =D

Thanks for the comment. And I don't think I have the heart to make Bam beat the shit out of Ville...haha...but that is an interesting point....*evil grin*

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annushkazhivago July 25 2006, 04:54:55 UTC
I know what you mean there. In a story I wrote there was one chapter where Bam's jealousy got the better of him and Ville got hurt... sad sad story.

I started writing on the story earlier in the day and the electricirty went off but I saved what I did first.

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616hasgotaname July 25 2006, 05:36:35 UTC
It's your story, do what you want with it. Stupid electricty. Thank god you saved it!

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sweet_666_777 July 25 2006, 05:11:34 UTC
It was a very good chapter! But I really wanna hit story Novak right now...asswipe. -_-

Anyways, loved it as always and can't wait for more!

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616hasgotaname July 25 2006, 05:37:37 UTC
Hey now, no blaming Novak. He's just...being him, haha. But I understand where you're coming from.

Thanks for the comment! I'll try to have the next part up as soon as possible!

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irena_aneri July 25 2006, 07:31:49 UTC
Hey, new to commenting. Your story is keeping me up so bad...3:30 am here.
I'm so upset with Ville >.< Great plot, original to say the least.

(Sorry if this comment is out of place, but I'm even more hooked into your Shadow Passion...and I was wondering whats the status of updates?)

You're an amazing author. Hope to talk more.

*Stabs Ville for being stupid*

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616hasgotaname July 25 2006, 16:21:33 UTC
I'm glad to see you decided to comment, it makes me smile! I try to update each fic after the other one, in order to keep it a bit even. So Shadow Passion will be updated next. (That's my favorite one, too)

Thanks for the awesome compliment! =D

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