"Crawling Backwards" Chapter Eleven

Jun 25, 2006 14:27

Title: Crawling Backwards
Author: xxShilaleighxx
Fandom: Music/VAM
Summery: Ville is in love with Bam, but Bam only loves Ville when he’s drunk. By morning it’s forgotten and Bam goes on to believe that they’re still just friends. Ville puts up with it for his love, but it’s slowly killing him inside.
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Pairing: VAM…eventually.
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salchow June 25 2006, 18:40:54 UTC
fc? THIS RAWKS!!! VIlle's head is a mess lol, i love it! make them hump, girl, or im gunna CRY with frustration!!!
great chapter as usual :D
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616hasgotaname June 25 2006, 18:59:09 UTC
Oh, humping they shall do.....*wicked grin*

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seelentraene June 25 2006, 19:43:18 UTC
Why do I want to scream right now?

Ville don´t .. just don´t ... I can´t believe he gives in.

Somehow my mind pictures a master-servant-relationship (no, not in a nice kinky way). Ville gives and gives and gives and Bam takes - hardly gives something back, but Ville takes and believes the lies Bam tells him (sorry, I still can´t believe Bam)

Hopefully Bam can convince Ville (and maybe me?) that he truely loves him...

more soon?

Traene

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616hasgotaname June 25 2006, 19:46:05 UTC
It's going to be tough---because I'm having doubts myself as to what kind of feelings Bam has for Ville. It can go one of two ways: either he realizes his mistakes and they have hot make up sex (which I'm sure would be a crowd pleaser) or it could go on with him being...well a dick. We'll see. More soon!

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seelentraene June 25 2006, 19:54:22 UTC
Well, I would prefer the second way - mainly because I believe an asshole can´t go to be a caring gentlemen

Not all storys can end happy and this one shouldn´t - but that´s just me

Traene

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616hasgotaname June 25 2006, 19:57:06 UTC
See, I was thinking the exact same thing! It's just...there's a few people that'll probably be pissed if I don't give it a storybook ending. But, hey, it's my story, and I'll end it as I see fit. I'll make up my mind when I get closer to the end.

Thanks for the comment!

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annushkazhivago June 25 2006, 23:13:36 UTC
Eeek!Hurry up and update.I must know...I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!

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anonymous June 25 2006, 23:43:16 UTC
wow... that was.... i think you should end it how you want, you want it sad make it sad... more soon??

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616hasgotaname June 26 2006, 00:01:45 UTC
I'm glad you agree. And I'm glad you like it! More is on the way!

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sweet_666_777 June 26 2006, 00:32:32 UTC
*glares at Ville* Bad Ville bad! You should have slapped the shit out of Bam! ...though I mean while your there you might as well have hot yumm vam sex...But anyway Bad Ville!

Grate chapter loved it!

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616hasgotaname June 26 2006, 01:06:23 UTC
Hahahahahaha. ...though I mean while your there you might as well have hot yumm vam sex... that made me littlerally "lol". Wow. Thanks for the comment!

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