Comments | __vam: Just Another Kid

vagueangel in __vam

Just Another Kid

Apr 06, 2006 08:38

Summary- Bam's known for a while that Ville has a little.. problem. But what happens when it starts getting out of control?
Rating- Mostly PG-13, but since it's me, there are NC-17 bits thrown in.
Caution- This is a bloody long story.
Right then... onward.

( Alternate End )

Comments 68

andiiv April 6 2006, 12:48:53 UTC

No that was terrible! I preferred the other ending. I don't like sad endings. Bitch!!

vagueangel April 6 2006, 13:37:12 UTC

Wow! That's kinda harsh.....

andiiv April 6 2006, 14:51:33 UTC

Awww sorry babe. I meant the ending was a bitch, not you personally.

vagueangel April 6 2006, 14:55:32 UTC

lol But I still get to give you a hard time for it. ^_^

Thread 5

fear_of_light April 6 2006, 13:26:12 UTC

*sniffles* that was heartbreaking! But still lovely!

vagueangel April 6 2006, 13:37:37 UTC

Thank you, dear. I prefer that ending. lol

remenissionsx April 6 2006, 14:21:23 UTC

Dude, I am about to cry.
I kept hoping that Ville would see the tape and at least go back to kid!Ville.
♥

vagueangel April 6 2006, 14:27:10 UTC

Yeah. Kinda... didn't have anywhere to put it in the other ending. lol But I had that bit with Ville talking to the camera writ for like, bloody ever before I got round to ending the fic. Oh well

bitch_whistle April 6 2006, 14:22:17 UTC

That was incredible. Seriously, I actually had to join the community so I could log in and post (coffinsteadoflurkingcoff)! I started reading this on bam_fic but you stopped posting there, and someone pointed me over here instead. All I can say is thank God for that ( ... )

vagueangel April 6 2006, 14:32:21 UTC

Man... I stopped posting on bam_fic cos... I'm just not that good. lol I didn't really work out after in my head cos.. Well, honestly, I've said it before, but this was so emotionally draining to me, that after it was done, it was just *done*. I didn't have anything left. So I just let it be. I kind of like the open-endedness though, it feels very real to me. And yes, this was definetly meant to be the real one, this is what was in my head when I started. But, fangirls and their happy endings.. lol (love you guys...) So... I mean, damn! Thanks for reading and leaving such a wonderful review!

bitch_whistle April 6 2006, 14:45:46 UTC

*nod* I can understand that, the emotional drain factor. Still, I have a little quirk for fics that start *after* a story has happened, when the race is run so to speak, the aftermath of the shit hitting the fan! Damn, I'm going to be writing a 'where did it/could it go from here' mentally for the next few weeks, I can see it coming! Wretched woman for getting me caught up like this - I'm a total sucker for psychological shit.

It's funny - this works very well as the real ending, yet in some ways the way you've written Ville throughout makes a return to himself more plausible. Just perhaps not as easily as the other ending makes out. That said, you had a pretty much perfect last few lines to end that one, it just happened a little too easy *G*

Aaanyway, I should shut up now - but, um, you completely *are* good enough to keep posting on bam_fic. *rolls eyes at you* I post there :P

vagueangel April 6 2006, 14:48:17 UTC

I couldn't be arsed to put that much effort into an ending I wasn't that fond of. Plus, whatever. It's psychological. The brain is a weird place. lol That's my excuse- er... my story, and I'm sticking to it. ^_~

Thread 5

gal8028 April 6 2006, 14:47:22 UTC

i liked the other ending better! oh you made me cry and i never cry. that was so sad. i dont know if i hate it or love it. you rock. i love not having the right words because something affected me so. you rock.

vagueangel April 6 2006, 14:54:23 UTC

lol Thanks, ducky