broken-heart susan (welcome home) - penned july 11, 2004 @ 11:30 pm
welcome home, broken-heart Susan
you think you're winnin' but in reality you're losin'
down with the moon and the sky and the stars --
the celestial bodies reflected on passing cars
give it a whirl, miss material girl
and if your heart is breakin', it's a mistake you're makin'
'cause there's no love i'm sendin' to you
just a broken-heart postcard-wrapped bullet or two
i won't forget you 'til i drink my sorrows away...
welcome home, broken-heart Susan
though you blame it on fate, it's the path you're choosin'
and heaven to you's just a one-star motel
another liquor-drenched heartache like you know so well
"live and let die", he was just another guy
seems like the think you can't see is that love is free
i know you're tryin' but your outlook's sour
'cause it just isn't love when you're chargin' per hour
pull up the flower and go toss the life away...
welcome home, broken-heart Susan
why don't you better yourself, quit the drugs and the boozin'?
you're always screamin' for times long since gone
yeah, you'd go back to normal if it turned you on
wrong time, wrong place, an angel fallen from grace
little Susan it cuts me when you weep
i see the memories of seeds sown that you'll never reap
you're goin' too deep, don't forsake the beauty of day...
welcome home, broken-heart Susan
welcome home, broken-heart Susan
welcome home, my broken-heart Susan
welcome home...
welcome home my heartbreakin' Susan
i'd ask for you back but i'm afraid of you refusin'
won't you come with me and see how it'll go?
can't knock it 'til you try it or you'll never know
come, take a chance on a real-deal romance
here's my heart - don't destroy it, you might find that you enjoy it
Susie, Susie, please become my wife
together, oh my baby, we'll have the perfect life
not a pinch of strife, 'cause i'm takin' you home today...
welcome home, my little Susie
welcome home.
---END---
July 11, 2004
11:30 PM
©Amanda Derzy
(Steal it or even part of it without my permission and I will rend you limb from limb. Really really.)
INSPIRATION: Certain aspects of the movie "The Butterfly Effect"
Any comments are appreciated, unless they are terribly derogatory, in which case I shall have no choice but to messily disembowel you. Hope you weren't attached to your bowels...
you think you're winnin' but in reality you're losin'
down with the moon and the sky and the stars --
the celestial bodies reflected on passing cars
give it a whirl, miss material girl
and if your heart is breakin', it's a mistake you're makin'
'cause there's no love i'm sendin' to you
just a broken-heart postcard-wrapped bullet or two
i won't forget you 'til i drink my sorrows away...
welcome home, broken-heart Susan
though you blame it on fate, it's the path you're choosin'
and heaven to you's just a one-star motel
another liquor-drenched heartache like you know so well
"live and let die", he was just another guy
seems like the think you can't see is that love is free
i know you're tryin' but your outlook's sour
'cause it just isn't love when you're chargin' per hour
pull up the flower and go toss the life away...
welcome home, broken-heart Susan
why don't you better yourself, quit the drugs and the boozin'?
you're always screamin' for times long since gone
yeah, you'd go back to normal if it turned you on
wrong time, wrong place, an angel fallen from grace
little Susan it cuts me when you weep
i see the memories of seeds sown that you'll never reap
you're goin' too deep, don't forsake the beauty of day...
welcome home, broken-heart Susan
welcome home, broken-heart Susan
welcome home, my broken-heart Susan
welcome home...
welcome home my heartbreakin' Susan
i'd ask for you back but i'm afraid of you refusin'
won't you come with me and see how it'll go?
can't knock it 'til you try it or you'll never know
come, take a chance on a real-deal romance
here's my heart - don't destroy it, you might find that you enjoy it
Susie, Susie, please become my wife
together, oh my baby, we'll have the perfect life
not a pinch of strife, 'cause i'm takin' you home today...
welcome home, my little Susie
welcome home.
---END---
July 11, 2004
11:30 PM
©Amanda Derzy
(Steal it or even part of it without my permission and I will rend you limb from limb. Really really.)
INSPIRATION: Certain aspects of the movie "The Butterfly Effect"
Any comments are appreciated, unless they are terribly derogatory, in which case I shall have no choice but to messily disembowel you. Hope you weren't attached to your bowels...