ok, i looked over your translation and it kinda made me cringe at times, so i made a quick correction (or re-translation).
you're welcome.
btw this isn't meant to bash you in any way, maybe you can just take it and learn a thing or two =). also people shouldn't stay that misinformed.
cheers!
if you only look at the surface, i can't free myself from that kind image of you imprinted in my memory though i don't want to accept anything (from you)
those intentions stuck in my mind are being torn to shreds without me noticing it
you were stained by desire and the stench of immorality is seeping through
neither my body or heart belong to anyone
is being deceived or deceiving evil?
it's like the right answer can't be found out
though i can't save you if i go on just like this
even if i tried to change it, you surely wouldn't get it (as in the feeling won't get through to her)
the words i'd like to say don't come out in a good way
i don't want to believe that it's foolish to wish for a never ending dream
signs that push me to giving up staring at me with ambitious eyes
should we destroy absolutely everything?
cut that dozing scenery with rusted nails
are only the things we can see the truth?
if it couldn't be seen through yet, the meaning behind your words, your true motives asking for it now seems useless to me
the demons true face is hidden, he's wearing the mask of an angel
his sins, carved in his genetic memory, repeats itself
let's forget everything for now and sleep like a child
so if it's a bad dream it will disappear when we wake up
and that's that.
if there're any questions left, shoot.
i might post it later on my translation journal (last.fm user jorei), so no using it outside of there without my permission.
you're welcome.
btw this isn't meant to bash you in any way, maybe you can just take it and learn a thing or two =).
also people shouldn't stay that misinformed.
cheers!
if you only look at the surface,
i can't free myself from that kind image of you imprinted in my memory
though i don't want to accept anything (from you)
those intentions stuck in my mind
are being torn to shreds without me noticing it
you were stained by desire and the stench of immorality is seeping through
neither my body or heart belong to anyone
is being deceived
or deceiving evil?
it's like the right answer can't be found out
though i can't save you if i go on just like this
even if i tried to change it, you surely wouldn't get it (as in the feeling won't get through to her)
the words i'd like to say don't come out in a good way
i don't want to believe that it's foolish to wish for a never ending dream
signs that push me to giving up
staring at me with ambitious eyes
should we destroy absolutely everything?
cut that dozing scenery with rusted nails
are only the things we can see the truth?
if it couldn't be seen through yet,
the meaning behind your words, your true motives
asking for it now seems useless to me
the demons true face is hidden, he's wearing the mask of an angel
his sins, carved in his genetic memory,
repeats itself
let's forget everything for now and sleep like a child
so if it's a bad dream it will disappear when we wake up
and that's that.
if there're any questions left, shoot.
i might post it later on my translation journal (last.fm user jorei), so no using it outside of there without my permission.
later dudes or dudettes.
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