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I just found a paper I wrote about family for Professor Yezzo's english class (remember him, Joe?)
He wrote;
Liz: How like you this paper is...tender, intelligent and biting. You area reverent and dutiful daughter and grand daughte. Your wit is enhanced in your deeply rooted respect and your charm is enlivened as you honor your grandparents. Liz, you are are a smart and special student. Your ideas are worthy of attention. Thank you. You have been a credit to my class.
:)
& I just found another paper and the note reads;
"Ms. Fein
The only thing stopping this paper from being an A is the mechanics. Clean that up, that is make the paper presentable, and you've an easy A. I enjoy not only your content, but your style. Your voice commands attention, its whimsical intelligence, its edge. I like it. I ride the unfolding of your thinking like one rides a carnival ride. It is exhilirating. Thank you."
wheee.
He wrote;
Liz: How like you this paper is...tender, intelligent and biting. You area reverent and dutiful daughter and grand daughte. Your wit is enhanced in your deeply rooted respect and your charm is enlivened as you honor your grandparents. Liz, you are are a smart and special student. Your ideas are worthy of attention. Thank you. You have been a credit to my class.
:)
& I just found another paper and the note reads;
"Ms. Fein
The only thing stopping this paper from being an A is the mechanics. Clean that up, that is make the paper presentable, and you've an easy A. I enjoy not only your content, but your style. Your voice commands attention, its whimsical intelligence, its edge. I like it. I ride the unfolding of your thinking like one rides a carnival ride. It is exhilirating. Thank you."
wheee.