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[Secret Santa Fic] In Such a State [4/5]

Dec 31, 2011 20:45

Title: In Such a State [4/5]
Author: 9mm_meg
Recipient: seraphic_dream
Rating: PGish
Warnings: 6-year-old Fem!Canada?
Summary: Alfred is just after a Christmas present for his little sister, but when he finds a life-sized, broken doll outside a shop and takes him home, he gets quite a bit more than he bargained for. Victorian!AU

( Of all the thousands of possible implications of that statement, only one occurred to Arthur at that instant, and he found his mind flooded with questions that he didn’t dare ask. )

secret santa 2011, multipart, usuk, fic, hetalia

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socialholic January 2 2012, 13:00:44 UTC

Sskdfjslfkj oh my gosh, I can't even express in words how this fic has completely captured my heart! This is simply amazing, the plot is quite interesting and especially the way it's developing during the course of the fic. I have no idea how it's going to be resolved in the end, if Arthur will manage to turn himself back into a human or not and if Madeleine will get better-- I really hope everything will work out and we'll have a happy ending for everyone, but of course this is only for you to decide <3. But I'm really curious of how Arthur would feel, physically, if he managed to change himself back into human o_o I mean, I love how you've input all the details how Arthur feels weird rolling his eyes but how he has gotten somewhat used to all the quirks of being made of porcelain, so how would it feel if he had to accustom to being of flesh and blood again, feeling everything he doesn't anymore.

BUT SLFKDJSLFKJ. I absolutely love your characterization *_* even as a doll Arthur acts exactly like he does as a person and Alfred is smart but still his adorkable self and aaah. Their pasts are incredibly interesting and they do explain their personalities, how they came to be the way they are, but I think it's even more interesting how they are developing now, after meeting each other.

This fic is just pure awesome, Alfred's JustArthur and Arthur's doll form's Glare of Death, as well as a ton of other things crack me up, and the more serious parts, Alfred's terrible past and Arthur's troubles with his family on the other hand break my heart. You've done a wonderful job with this fic and I simply can't wait to read more <3 !

9mm_meg January 9 2012, 03:05:10 UTC

Hello, Best Comment Evar. Where have you been all my life?

I'll tell you right now that CH5 has just been posted, so I don't have to try not to give anything away in this reply ^_^

I just love writing these boys, and I'm so glad to hear that you like the characterizations <3 It's great to hear that I've done something right. Haha.

Really, though, thanks so much <333 I hope that you still feel the same way after it's over, too~

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