Titian's Death - the Aftermath

Dec 22, 2006 13:28

The whole world was silent.

No one could speak; no one could move.  Titian's lifeless body lay on the ground, limp and twisted.  He was dead - he was gone forever.  No one knew what to do.  And still, the world was silent.

Until a quiet sobbing reached everyone's ears.  Hans knelt on the ground beside Titian's body, crying for his mentor, his protector, his only friend - and the man he had killed.  The sight felt sore to the others - raw, like a wound that had never scabbed over.  No one knew what they should do - Hans was ignoring them anyway, and no one wanted to intrude on his grief.

Finally, Dierdre stepped towards him.  She knelt beside him and after a short, hesitant moment she put her arms around him and held him as he cried.  It seemed strange to watch Hans breaking down; he had been strong, unflappable...   Sturdy.  But seeing him crying, clinging to Dierdre as a child clings to its mother - it was like he was a tree that had been felled.

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Yup, that's it.  I might have something else later.

-8LB

actual scene, emotional, deirdre, descriptive sort of, in story, hans, near the end, hans is a tree

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