27: In the library

May 20, 2008 21:10

Title: One Bullet, Two(explicit)
Author: roxiezeke Prompt: 27. In the library ( Read more... )

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cruzle May 21 2008, 03:48:43 UTC
No, seriously? Go you for writing this! Personally I'd never put up with a guy that treated me this way, but I still couldn't help but find this... cute, for lack of a better adjective. I've been dying to see them written this way, so I thank you for doing it.

/wants to do it now too OTL

In case it wasn't clear, AWESOME JOB >;D

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mortar May 21 2008, 03:57:53 UTC
lol. Thank you. ilu

I'll make a better comment when I'm like, actually coherent again.

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cruzle June 10 2008, 20:10:46 UTC
I BEAT YOU TO COHERENCY. BUAHAHA.

Okay, well. I have some things I want to say about you and your writing, JUST SO YOU KNOW.

I really appreciate the things you write. :D To me, from my vantage point, it seems as if you're so unafraid. You just write what you want to, and don't worry what the comms might think as far as gen-bending or whatever might go. You're the first to do things that the rest of us might never post, like Gokudera being this mean, or female Yamamoto. You're an innovative fanficcer, and I approve of that.

Also, I really, really like your writing a lot. Sometimes there are grammar errors or other things that aren't absolutely perfect, but who needs absolutely perfect? Like I said, you're really innovative. It's such a great treat whenever you write and post a fic. :D

A few of your fics are like a couple or a trio of little vignettes that go together, and I like that, too.

I DUNNO. I fail with words. But you're appreciated! Keep writing : )

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mortar June 10 2008, 22:18:05 UTC
LOL I FAIL.

Jesus! Thank you! Manman you actually don't know how much of a scardy-cat I am when it comes to posting most anything now-a-days. WELL, that'd be if I had anything to post. I haven't written much of anything lately and I'm not sure if I want to...? idk anymore man. One of my friends stopped writing and it's really brought me down in spirits and, like, inspiration and stuff.

And concerning the grammar and spelling: I need a beta. Bad. If I ever write something again I should post it with a 'help wanted' ad.

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mortar May 21 2008, 22:11:27 UTC
lol thank you~ I don't think they're that original~ doesn'y matter thank youuuu.

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swn_2gthr_wrng June 11 2008, 21:19:30 UTC
Wow. Ever since I first started reading the series, Gokudera always just seemed so gay to me lol. This is the first fic I've read in which Gokudera having sex with a GIRL is actually believable (even if it is gender-bent Yama), and quite entertaining. Also Yamamoto as a girl is genius. Kudos to you! ^_^

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mortar June 11 2008, 22:39:50 UTC
He's... idk, Gokudera always struck me as being whatever; like, either bisexual or asexual. But that you on the believable part, lol. I do try.

ilu @ the comment.

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zippy_p_faye July 12 2010, 21:20:38 UTC
Heh, you've certainly got teenage boys nailed, right down to the not caring one whit about whether the girl gets off. Well done. :D

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mortar July 12 2010, 21:34:54 UTC
I can honestly say I was not expecting a comment on this ever again.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and thought my bratty teenagers were right :|b

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zippy_p_faye July 13 2010, 01:29:18 UTC
I'm new to the fandom and have been searching for more reading material, usually in reverse chronological order.

The Tsuna's room one was also particularly enjoyable. I like to think that those mental images Yamamoto gave Gokudera were insiduous enough that he eventually snapped and jumped Yama, or something.

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mortar July 13 2010, 01:33:26 UTC
God, I don't even remember that one, I'll have to go back and find it.

2 years is tooo muchhhhhh for me~~~ but thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed that one too :B

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