Comments | 8059challenge: 65: Hospital Bed

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65: Hospital Bed

Apr 22, 2008 23:22

Title: Silky White Needles (Feels like Life)
Author: roxiezeke
Prompt: 65: Hospital Bed
Wordcount: 1983
Notes: THIS IS THE SMUTTY VERSION I PROMISED :D LOOK AT ME I WIN. I have 30 minutes left until my deadline. Absolute win. The not-smutty original version is up at my journal. HAVE FUN :D editps. In my reply to yami_kallima I did a scene with Gokudera doing the ( Read more... )

fanfiction, challenge 1 entry

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as_it_tastes April 23 2008, 05:33:13 UTC

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HEARTS SPAM BECAUSE I SUCK AT COMMENTS. ♥

mortar April 23 2008, 05:36:01 UTC

HEART-SPAM IS A-OKAY WITH ME.

as_it_tastes April 23 2008, 05:36:46 UTC

YAY! \o/

mortar April 23 2008, 05:38:00 UTC

Yay

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shaorankun April 23 2008, 05:56:51 UTC

LOL HOT

HAHA
Yama was hungry
*gets hit*

*tries to comment on something non-yama*

"There was a heavy sigh as Gokudera uncrossed his legs and placed them over the side of the bed and on either side of Yamamoto. "

HAHA I like how he's so used to it
he didn't fight it or anything

mortar April 23 2008, 06:01:17 UTC

Nope. LOL. He doesn't fight a damn thing. xD

IT IS HOT, ISN'T IT. MAKES UP FOR THE FACT THAT WHERE I LIVE THE SNOW COMES UP TO OUR THIGHS. :D

Yamamoto is a sweet-heart. Comment on him all you want.

shaorankun April 23 2008, 06:11:13 UTC

HE IS A SWEETIE ISN'T HE
XD'
haha
"Comment on him all you want."
Haha! XD You don't want to get me started
those caps are already a bad sign *cough*
I can raaaaaant about yama LOL *nods*

mortar April 23 2008, 22:18:13 UTC

HE IS.

:D

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mortar April 23 2008, 22:20:13 UTC

Thank you!

The original version is up at my journal and it isn't friendlocked. It doesn't actually explain anything more than this does though xD

sunshine_melodi April 23 2008, 16:01:15 UTC

Very, very SEXY!

OMG! *fans self*

I'm so happy you were able to finish it. 8DDDD Nicely done, m'dear. 8DDDD

Yama is so adorably cute and I love how Gokudera reacts to it. Hahaha. Lovin this one. ;D

mortar April 23 2008, 22:24:07 UTC

I do try.

I'm happy I was able to finish it too. My porn muse ditched me like, last second so this was HARD to push out. :D

Yamammochan is cute. and Gokudera is a ass-face. :D

yami_kallima April 23 2008, 23:09:02 UTC

YOU SAID I'D FIND OUT WHY GOKUDERA CUT OFF HIS TONGUE YOU LIAR!

but I like it anyways, it was hot XD
Also thank you so much for not describing the tongue removal, I think I would have thrown up if you did

as_it_tastes April 23 2008, 23:21:39 UTC

SHE IS TOTALLY A LIAR. Obviously we must somehow get epic revenge. TOO BAD I SUCK AT PRANKS. >.<

yami_kallima April 23 2008, 23:25:02 UTC

I can get revenge. I visit her frequently. SHE MAY BE MY BEST FRIEND BUT FOR THIS SHE MUST PAY! *shakes fist in her direction*

I'll just tell her brother to attach her because I suck at pranks too...

as_it_tastes April 23 2008, 23:26:10 UTC

Have him go raid her room or something. XD

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