Comments | 8059challenge: 4: In the Tub

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4: In the Tub

Apr 18, 2008 23:51

Title: A Monster in the Bathtub (explicit?)
Author: roxiezeke
Prompt: 4: In the Tub
Wordcount: 1611
( A Monster in the Bathtub )

fanfiction, challenge 1 entry

Comments 146

as_it_tastes April 19 2008, 06:06:01 UTC

HOLY SHIT you were right it was kinda creepy.

SOMEHOW THE END WAS REALLY CUTE, THOUGH. AND I LOVE YOU FOR IT. ♥♥♥

WHY ARE YOU SO AWESOME? >.<

mortar April 19 2008, 06:09:39 UTC

Yeah I know I am kinda right. I told you I'd piss myself. LOL

THE ENDING WAS VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY FUCKING HARD.

ps just because

and you'll never look at italics the same. or faucets.

as_it_tastes April 19 2008, 06:13:35 UTC

It was creepy in a TOTALLY AWESOME way, though. \o/

WELL I'M REALLY GLAD YOU DID IT~ ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

...I dunno, I've seen lot of italics. I WILL DEFINITELY NEVER BE ABLE TO LOOK AT FAUCETS THE SAME AGAIN THOUGH. ...I can't decide whether I want to XD or D=.

mortar April 19 2008, 06:15:48 UTC

BOTH MAYBE?
BEST OF BOTH WORLDS?

my friend thinks it isn't creepy. wtf?

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yami_kallima April 19 2008, 06:10:18 UTC

I didn't really find it creepy. I liked the whole having every appliance on part though.

And faucet face.

The ending made me happy inside.

mortar April 19 2008, 06:14:17 UTC

YOU'RE A FREAK. (I liked that part too)
Faucet-face is the fucking creepyest thing EVER. THE SHITTY PART IS IT WAS A MAJOR PART OF MY CHILDHOOD. WTF. WHY AM I SO MESSED UP. (cept he was just Faucet for me. And no you will NEVER know about anything about him.)

The ending was FUCKING HARD. dnsoiafndosaufinbdsfhads.

yami_kallima April 19 2008, 06:16:14 UTC

you love my freakiness! Yay for weird quirks!
Then why mention that it wa part of your childhood FREAK!

But it was GOOD!

mortar April 19 2008, 06:17:37 UTC

NO YOUR THE FREAK. FREAK-FACE.

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sunshine_melodi April 19 2008, 06:56:04 UTC

This one is so dark. 8D

Yama's reaction to what he did is believable considering the circumstances. I can totally see Gokudera doing that too...well, knocking some sense into him. 8D

Once again, very nicely done. ^______^

mortar April 20 2008, 08:03:05 UTC

Sankyuu!
I know, I know. I wrote this...
idk where it actually came from :D

shaorankun April 19 2008, 08:54:38 UTC

That's a very creative way to do "in the tub"
Yama doesn't seem like assassin material XD

Glad gokudera's there to comfort him *_*

mortar April 20 2008, 08:04:55 UTC

He doesn't, but at the same time he does D:
What a strange person!

jubsx April 19 2008, 21:27:43 UTC

WOW. 77 comments already...Shiiiit ANYWAYS! AWESOME!! I liked how you tied the ending with somthing that happened in the beginning/middleish! This is <3 awesomeness

mortar April 20 2008, 08:06:09 UTC

*coherent thank you when it's not two in the morning*
SANKYUU