1: On the Bed

[mortar]

Title: The Leopard, Lion, and She Wolf (explicit)
Author: roxiezeke
Prompt: 1: On the Bed
Wordcount: 691
Author Notes: Dante as in the Dante from The Divine Comedy by Dante Alighieri not Dante from the Devil May Cry series.

Comments

[jubsx]

My god I absolutely love this T.T And it's so different compared to people's interpretation of 8059 "On Bed". It would instantly be SEX and HARDCORE SEX but it's more emotional and realistic not just Mindless Self Indulgence. More of a realistic 8059 which I love =) Beautiful =) Amazing Job. ^^

[mortar]

Thank you. As you know I tried to go at it with a more IC kinda thing. I was debating mindless sex then I said: "No. I'mma going to be emotional, because 8059 IS emotional."

[trimgular]

Very nice. You captured the more bittersweet side of 8059 very well. ♥

[mortar]

Sankyuu. <3 I tried my very hardest. I had shuffle on and happy songs kept coming up D

[trimgular]

Lol I actually made a playlist specifically for working on 8059 stuff. |D

[mortar]

I would do that too but I'm not good at making playlists for one thing. I find one song and that song is perfect (still haven't found it) and I just put it on repeat. LOL but I figured I'd BREAK THE MOLD today and this is what I got. A little disjointed, maybe a little self-inflicted bit of agony. IT'S SO EMO IS MAKES YAMAMOTO BOW HIS HEAD IN SHAME D:

[yami_kallima]

because it was you I was seriously expecting PWP. You have proved me wrong. Congrats.
I always like your emotional work better than physical. Then again I am not too nice and like to read about people being miserable. But this still made me very happy.

[mortar]

OMG R U SRS?
LOL
I KILLED YOU.
But I'm glad you like ANYTHING about my writing because sometimes I dun like it any.
I was explecting PWP too but as I said in my comment to Jubs:
I was debating mindless sex then I said: "No. I'mma going to be emotional, because 8059 IS emotional."
LE FIN

[yami_kallima]

You killed me?
and it is (NO I WAS NOT TEMPTED TO WRIT TIS TO SAVE TIME DX<) very emotional

[mortar]

(I killed you with the chat lingo : ))
EMOtional. :X

[shaorankun]

WAH that was written beautifully =3

you were very creative with on the bed! !!

[mortar]

Yeah. I know. I figured: "Hey, I don't feel like writing mindless PWP so I'm going to write something a little more EMOtional."
Did it work? LOL
Sankyuu! I was worried again because I'm not sure how people would react the there not being any actual action :X

[shaorankun]

yes of course it worked 8D

what are you talking about?
Yamamoto wanking off on a bed is sexy action LOL *gets hit*

*likes Yamamoto most* XD

[mortar]

I actually got into the series for Yamamoto and Bel :X I'm not sure if I should curse the people who drew fanart of them or not. LOL
I didn't actually write this with any intention of it being sexy or it being a turn on, how odd is that for a "SEXSEXSEX" challenge?

[as_it_tastes]

O-OMG, wow, that was totally amazing~ ♥

It was hot, but also really heartbreaking and kfa'd;ajdfha I AM NOT COHERENT NOW, BUT IT WAS AWESOME! >.<

[mortar]

Thank you! You don't know how many dreams you fulfilled by making a button-mashing comment. I've always wanted one.
Thank you so much, it's supposed to be more heartbreaking than hot. But whatever makes you happy makes me happy too.

[as_it_tastes]

Well I'm glad I was able to fulfill your dreams, since you totally fulfilled mine by posting this! ♥♥

[mortar]

LOL.
I CAN CHECK THAT OFF MY TO DO LIST. Fulfilling someones dreams. I can get used to this. :D