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hakutenshi December 23 2008, 12:09:21 UTC
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!

Sorry, but this is totally awesome!!!

“Jesus fucking Christ on a fucking Pogo stick! Are you trying to kill me, dickwad?”
This totally killed me XDDD

Along with the EXTREME SEX TIPPPPPSS!! and the fuck's rising up into the air XD

this was really great, thank you for writing :D :D :D

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thecommawhore December 23 2008, 14:35:18 UTC
Ahahaha I had so much fun with Gokudera's 'creative' mouth (take that however you wish XDD) That line had me giggling for a good five minutes too.

And can't you just SEE Ryohei taking them both aside, all serious, and then offering them some... EXTREME SEX TIPS! =D I love that guy. So much.

Thanks so much for your great comment, I'm so happy people liked it!! I was really nervous to post it at first but I'm very glad I did <3

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hakutenshi December 23 2008, 15:00:23 UTC
hahaha XD okay, I WILL THINK OF THIS as TALKING now XD

oh yes, the strange thing is, I REALLY can do that XD I mean.. the best would be in school like "Guys, come with me" all quietly and then ala "and then you have to do THIS TO AN EXTREME UNTIL THE OTHER ONE CUMS!!!!!" in the middle of the corridor.
I really would die of laughter XD
And I think even his sun guardian powers wouldn't help him healing afterwards because Gokudera would make him swallow a whole bunch of dynamite XD

no problem ^^ I really like it ^^
Wahh~ I wanna write like that too >.< But my english is not good enough to write every grammar thing correctly and I already got many "Look at your grammar" comments ^^"
*goes looking out for a beta again~~*

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thecommawhore December 28 2008, 19:30:28 UTC
OMG YES XDD And Yamamoto would just be laughing his head off, of course. I'd feel really bad for Kyoko, though - who's gonna tell her why her brother is in the hospital with third-degree burns all over him? XD

And I know you've probably heard this before, but practice makes perfect! And a beta really helps, too - I'm looking for one as well, lol. But do keep trying! =D

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hakutenshi December 28 2008, 20:48:48 UTC
he so would, yeah! XD he would lie right beside Ryouhei then because of a stomachache of EXTREME laughter XD

well, just send tsuna over, he'll create a wonderful story I think XD "And then a dragon came and threw fire and he wanted to protect us and... ehehehe~" XD

yeah i did XD but thank you ^-^ you too! ^.^

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