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kaibasgirl in 7_chakras

Contrasting Shades (Azula, D, Sound)

Mar 13, 2008 18:48

Title: Contrasting Shades
Author: kaibasgirl
Claim: Azula
Challenge: Duality
Chakra/Themeset: Sound
Prompt: Truth & Lies
Notes: I know that duality is usually two pieces, but I asked if it was okay to do it in one, and I was told it was fine. I wrote this way back in August, after I had already made the claim for this challenge. I posted this on ff.net, ( Read more... )

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music4ever159 March 16 2008, 21:10:05 UTC

Um...well, the last line doesn't quite make sense. "who I am and really are"? Forgive me for being a grammar geek, but i don't think you can form a sentence other than "who I really am". And btw, Azula's a beyotch and PROUD OF IT. She's a self-proclaimed monster.