Taking Care of Each Other

[5thofficial]

by miss_black91

Comments

[great_whatsit]

Thanks for writing them; this is particularly lovely:

Daniele had just taken his hand and forced him to walk to the edge. “Isn't it beautiful?”, Daniele had asked. And Andrea looked. It was a dark, quiet night. They could see the lights, the sky, and mountains in the distance. They were up so high. Holding hands, higher than ever. When he looked at Daniele he saw that he was looking right back at him. Andrea didn't answer - not with words, anyway. He just kissed him slowly.

And your characterizations are great, Daniele feels especially right on.

[thelastfig]

The pacing in this is perfect and spot on- not too slow but slow enough to where the little details of their relationships are dragged out. The warm tone of this is beautiful, good job <3

[hoppipolla]

Beautifully sad and wonderful. Makes me sad for them all over again but it leaves me happy knowing that maybe there is a part of this in real life that happened. Thank you for writing this.

[smegu_chan]

This is absolutely beautiful. I love the way you portray these two, with Daniele acting like a kid and Andrea treating him as such in return, and yet he is still the more mature one in some ways.

Thank you so much for writing this!♥

[ladystardust18]

The "This is forever, you know?" almost made me cry.