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thelastfig July 26 2012, 05:32:21 UTC
oh my god. I think I'm in love with this. I was a bit apprehensive when I started because I'm not familiar with these players outside of occasionally seeing them play, but this was amazing! I was hooked the entire time and laughing and giggling! Seriously, this is amazing!

(Poldi 16:04) Subtlety. Is this an edible thing?

Love the cockiness in that line. It tells me pretty much everything I need to know about him personality wise

All the technology exchanges he has with his father! They are adorable and I loved these bits.

"One day you're going to have to tell me why you and Ulli aren't talking to each other."

I pretty much died laughing

This was a gem of a fic <3

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wh_mermaid July 26 2012, 15:23:59 UTC
;lkfjgs;dkjfgl;skjdfgl;ksjdfg;lkjsdf;jkgldkjfg OMG this is awesome. I just finished reading through most of the CF fics and I think this is my favorite. I can't even. The humor you've woven in to your writing is perfect, it really lights this story up and perfects it. All the different relationships he has- the technology thing with his father was probably my favorite part other than texting Poldi of course- combine richly and.... I seriously cannot do justice to how much I enjoyed this fic. I bow to you <3

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cheryl_bites July 28 2012, 13:16:35 UTC
Lol nice punchline. Good job on keeping the theme consistent.

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loozy April 4 2013, 11:28:43 UTC
Nice one :) Well written and the characters are well done, too :)

Btw, Per's brothers' names are Denis (the older one) and Timo ( the younger one).

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hipokras April 4 2013, 11:37:50 UTC
Gah damnit #ResearchFail
But thank you, I will fix that all times from now on :D

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