first off: granero! yay! brilliant fic - creative plot, rounded and intriguing characters, great tone and atmosphere, hot sex. enjoyed how you ended things, too. well done!
Oh God, this is like Christmas and Easter and my birthday and New Year's Eve all in one. I adore detective stories, can't get enough of them, and a detective story combined with this utterly, utterly delicious pairing is just about the best there can be. And the way you wrote them is absolutely amazing. I love the dynamics between them, their banter, their teasing, and the obvious chemistry they have, and I couldn't tear my eyes off the screen and wished I was a faster reader because I couldn't wait to find out how this would progress. The conversation on the train was adorably awkward, I nearly "aww"ed out loud. :D The smut was absolutely delicious, like magnet and metal finally clashing. And then Rubén had to leave, and I was all "nooooooooooooooo!" :( I'm just too addicted to happy endings, I guess. But I still loved this fic. Very well written, wonderfully intense, and also very authentic, even if your research is based on the North American police. My compliments!
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Anyway, I really like this fic. :D
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brilliant fic - creative plot, rounded and intriguing characters, great tone and atmosphere, hot sex. enjoyed how you ended things, too.
well done!
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