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[hibem]

Thought it would be nice to have a little bit of Joe backstory, at this point. This series of drabbles spans his early teenage years, age 11-14 or 15. Just a few notes, for clarity: Joe's full first name is actually Javier. Nana is Joe's adoptive parent/grandparent. Donny is Nana's grand-nephew; technically this makes Donny Joe's second cousin, if

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[arin_rowan]

A lot happens in this. There's a lot of powerful emotions in it, though as much as I enjoy reading these, I would rather shoot myself in the foot than try and track each of them down. (This is why me and English class have Issues.) The last one in Austin- I feel as if so much is compressed into so few words, like each sentence is carefully loaded with hidden meaning or emotion that changes depending on which perspective you look at it from.
I find it beautiful.

[hibem]

I love drabbling. It's really more like poetry than prose-writing, I think, because every word is important. ♥ thank you!