The Aftermath

[4everxd]

                 
Author: 4everxd  or Cutie Angel
Disclaimer: I don’t own them but I wish I did.
Pairing: Yunjae
Genre: Angst
Rating: Pg
Summary: We all know Jung Yunho right? The famous Hallyu star and leader one of the most popular boy band DBSK. Well what really happened to his life throughout the years? Read and find out.

A/N: Based on the

Comments

[4everxd]

OMG LOL all the ;_; faces you put. I didn't know it was so sad, maybe because I wrote it :/ I really hope it doesn't come true too >.< Ugh The thing about Yunho is that he thinks others first that's why he choose that road here. I hope in real life he is not like that >^< Ohhh *hugs* I know it's sad but life is cruel you know sometimes. The daydream shows that Yunho must stop this and go back to Jaejoong. BTW I didn't know what the comic was saying so this was made up and Ι don't if you saw that but in the comic Yunho talks too but I didn't know what to put so I made the wife talk more. I agree with you *shakes Yunho too* Of course Jaejoong still loves him that's why he is back ;) Go Yunho~ get your lover back! Anyways this one-shot is like my perspective of Yunjae, unfortunately that's how I think their future is gonna be if don't like say to the world the are friends again but secretly lovers hiding(cause you know Korea)and yeah... ;__; You didn't tell me how did you find my writing is it a little better? :) I am glad you liked it though <3

[hattukissa]

I completely forgot to mention your writing because I was paying so much attention to the story XD the only problems I can see are grammatical errors because I really think you have a way with words and making the atmosphere of the fic shine through! Maybe you should get a beta to fix that? o_O but story wise I don't see any problems whatsoever! <3 I think your strengths are definitely in making the reader understand how the character is feeling and really feel it with him! You should definitely keep writing ^^
And I didn't understand anything of the comic so I only read the story pretty much haha~