Wild intentions 1/..

[4everxd]

Author: 4everxd  or Cutie Angel
Disclaimer: I don’t own them but I wish I did.
Pairing: Yunjae
Genre: Romance, Humor
Rating: PG-15(for now)
Summary: Jaejoong needed to start working out again and who is the best person to help him other than Jung Yunho?
Chapter 1

Comments

[hattukissa]

This reminds me so much of the scene in Dangerous Love where Yunho and Jae go to the gym!! XD You know what, humor is a really difficult genre to write (I've tried that and failed miserably D:) but I think you did a really good job! I had a grin on my face the entire time XD especially at the start when Jaejoong thought about his dongsaengs.. God, I wouldn't mind Jaejoong's ass a bit rounder than it is, the guy needs to eat for God's sake! XD though I do miss the muscles ;^;
I'm totally not surprised that most of the gym's customers are female XD (Jaejoong should fit in just well! *gets bricked*) I'd work out like mad every day if Yunho worked at my gym haha.. I guess the others are planning to hook them up, right? ;) I love how Yunho payed attention to Jae's ass and then recognized him~
That last scene where Yunho gropes him was totally like the one in Dangerous love XD I kinda pictured them looking like that~ Jae's cheeks were so cute and full then ;^; I do have one complaint though, WHY WAS IT SO SHORT ;;___;;
I'll definitely read how Yunho's and Jaejoong's workout plan will go and if it will turn into another kind of work out *wiggles eyebrows*
There were some grammatical errors but I'm sure you'll get better and better if you keep writing more! ^^ When are you planning to post the next part?
Anyways, good job Vasia! I really want to read more! <3__<3

[4everxd]

Oh my god your comment <3 Gurl~ you know me too well. That's what inspired me :D I did good with humor genre, that's nice! thank god xD True what you said about Jaejoong I totally agree, but here the things are different :P Of course, Jaejoong would fit well in here LOL me too Yunho in the gym is such a sexy image >w< Yep the others want them together :3 Yunho couldn't resist looking at Jae's ass xD UGH yes cutie Jaejoong is the key here! I know it's short(it's a little difficult to write more yet) but I will try to make it longer! :) OMG stop it! you know my thoughts! You will see ;)
Well I am still new to writing so you can expect here and there but I will try harder! ^^ The next part hmm I will write it today and post it today or tommorow, but I also have another fic I am writing which is a one-shot and it's gonna be really cool and I may post too! :D
Thank you for writing such a sweet comment! <3 It was helpful and it will make me better for sure :) I will update as soon as I can~ <3