[one shot] Taking a baby step
Title: Taking a baby step
Author:4d_artbitch
Genre: fluff fluffy fluff, angst.
Pairing: tofuho, ninja!jongkey
Warnings: betaed by ZE SHIM RAEMI look i write your full name lols aka candiiez
dongsaeng. thankyou so much my baby taeminie :3
wc: 3889.
( For days, Jinki follows close behind him, marvels in awe at everything like a puppy. )
Author:4d_artbitch
Genre: fluff fluffy fluff, angst.
Pairing: tofuho, ninja!jongkey
Warnings: betaed by ZE SHIM RAEMI look i write your full name lols aka candiiez
dongsaeng. thankyou so much my baby taeminie :3
wc: 3889.
( For days, Jinki follows close behind him, marvels in awe at everything like a puppy. )
Okay I admit I read a little before putting this comment so... TYPOS !
“Come on Jinki, let’s get some snacks”
“I’m on a diet, hyung. Let’s just leave” Jinki puffs his cheeck.
So, since when is Jonghyun older than Jinki ? Okay, I kno Jinki looks ike a baby, but, c'mon~
(oh and, is the red haired guy singing to his foor taem'ppa ? dunno, just asking~)
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GOSH THAT WAS SO KYEOPTA!!
TOFUHO IS SOO JJANG DAMNNN ICOULD GET NOSEBLEED JUST READING THAT..♥
(omg eonni you made so much typos i gave up after the tenth typo i spotted. xDD)
it was really adorable~
(and hell yea i like Jinki !)
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you can fix my typos and i will edit it.i'm too lazy to re-read what i've done write -_- /bricked
ah, thanks for dropping by, dear :) ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
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(lol yes i was cringing during my lecture. i dunno, it really just bugs me.)
Ya, eonni, you know you just gave me a good idea there.
I have no school today and way too much free time for someone as restrained and baby-ed by her mother like me(she doesnt want me to go out alone... /sulks). So, yes, I'll correct the typos I spot.
Because I have nothing to do with my life.
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AND YOU WROTE 'ZE SHIM RAEMI' KEKEKE ME GUSTAA !!!
and you even wrote 'my baby taeminie' aww~
thanks for the cute credits ^^
and youre welcome eonni~
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Honestly this typo and grammar thing is my weakness, really. (Blame the indonesian, javanese, and arabic which are more important at school & i have to learn them first than english).
sorry this is so late. Your comment was drowning between lj-announcement messages >_<
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You have to learn these three languages before learning english ? wooo~! For us, it's french(most important), then english. (but i dont learn that much things at school..)
Its okay eonni, I forgive you~
(but you better write me another tofuho)
(lol jk)
(wait)
(no, srsly.)
(write me another)
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(what, another tofuho?)
(tou should make one too, dongsaeng :D)
(dun dun!)
(i got youuuuu under my skin! *sings*)
(i'm kinda frustated because i have to work at 1st january)
(my boss is crazyyy)
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(me too? aw man.)
(i dun want, im too lazy)
(and im already writing a 2jun fic..)
(lol i got the song in ma head nao..)
(u happy ?! ><)
(omg how dare he! its freakin NEW YEAR dammit! how was it? stressful ? did you still have a good time with ur family ?)
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